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Valentines (standard:Fan Fiction, 2952 words)
Author: Dj MYCAdded: Apr 07 2003Views/Reads: 3446/2333Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)
Misty has an secret admirer who can it be? She gets a note which leads her to happieness or not? Pokemon Romance/Mystery
 



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***Across Town*** 

“I wonder why Ash had a sudden craving tuna, and needed me out the house
immediately. Hmmm?” Mrs. Ketchum said to herself; she thought how 
curious Ash had been acting this morning while continuing to finish her 
sons shopping. 

***Ketchum Residence*** 

Misty walks over to the dining room and found it empty also; retreating
back to the kitchen she found, on the counter, a box of chocolates. 

Chocolates? She thought, who were they for? ‘The Note!' Misty remembered
it said about looking inside a lovely' surprised “curiosity killed the 
cat, not the girl” she said out load before opening the box of 
chocolates. 

That was it, nothing but chocolate. All That suspense for nothing. She
sighed and sat down. After the day's events so far she was kinda 
hungry, she looks over to the box of candy and though ‘It is for me and 
anyways wasting sweets, its jus not like me.' 

Half way though eating the sweeties Misty noticed something; all the
chocolates were her favorites: Dark caramel, Almond, Mint chip and 
other flavors all that she liked. ‘Wow knows a lot ‘bout me' She was 
about to throw away the box when she saw something inscribed on the 
bottom. Looking closer it read: 

^Dear: Misty 

Hey hoped you enjoyed your little snack; I made sure to get all your
favorites. I know more about you than you think, anyways on with 
Step#2: Something nice and blue/ fearsome yet cute. / Check the living 
room. Once you get/ what you deserve/ you will know your final step. 

Ps. you always wanted this. ^ 

“What I always wanted?” she thought about this, but nothing was making
sense. So she decides just to get all the clues and see would this 
mystery guy be. Misty puts the chocolates down and strolled down to the 
living room where she found nothing; just like before. ‘This is getting 
annoying' she thought while taking a seat on one of Mrs. Ketchum's love 
seats. Wait...Mrs. Ketchum never had a love seat. Misty got up and 
inspected the chair. ‘Hmm... seems normal enough but... I never wanted 
a love seat!' she though as she turned around and to her surprise on 
the coffee table was...a Poke' ball. “A poke' ball?” the girl wondered 
out load. But no it wasn't just any poke' ball it was a love' ball < 
(if you ever play Pokemon Gold/Silver you will know what it is, but 
I'll explain it.)> The difference was that instead if the ball being 
red/white it was pink/white. 

So Misty thought ‘Hey if there a Pokemon in there and for me...I'm
keeping it!' happily she grabbed the pokeball and was about to throw it 
when a note fell from under the Pokeball. She looks at the note and 
then back to the pokeball, putting down the pokeball she picks up the 
folded piece of paper. 

^Dear: Misty 

Wow I can believe how close you are I'm really nervous; but I made my
decision and it is to tell you my love. Anyways I hope you like your 
new Pokemon; well you would have guessed it was a Pokemon by now right. 
Step#3: The finale step. Go to where it all began the start of your 
perfect life. Use you're presents as a guide or just let it help you 
glide. Confused? Well it'll all make sense! See you later. 

Ps. here's a clue: Entry # 347. ^ 

“HUH? Entry # 347? What is he talking about?” Misty was thinking it over
and over. Then something clicked in her head. Entry # 347 couldn't 
mean.....Her diary! ‘Bu-but how?' giving it another though her eyes 
suddenly became as big as saucers ‘Go to where it all began the start 
of your perfect life.' She remembered this. 

As quick as her legs could take Misty dashed upstairs; and into her
room. Grabbing her diary from the top self she turned it to Entry # 347 
and there it was: 

^Entry # 347 

Dear diary it's me again, Misty. Today we arrived at an island in the
Orange Islands called Trovita. There Ash won another badge while I won 
someone's heart. Yes you heard me I won a young boy's heart named Rudy; 
he was cute and acted like a real gentleman and even asked me to stay 
with him. Guess what my answer was ...... NO! Yes; No. you know the 
reason: Ash, yes Ash you know that boy I told you about in entry 1 
where I said he ruined my life and he was a snotty loser, well I guess 
I was wrong. Fishing him out of Viridian Lake was the start of my 
perfect life. Well it's getting late I'll write more tomorrow Buh Bye. 
^ 

Misty was speechless, there it was in her diary. ‘But how?' then
thinking back to the note Misty remembered something ‘Began my perfect 
life...' “Viridian Lake!!”  Last part she shouted. Scrimmaging around 
in her trying to find something nice to wear but thought it will just 
take up more time she ran down stairs and out the front door only to 
knock into a delivery man. 

“Hi” he said 

“Um hello. Can I help you?” Misty asked the delivery man standing in
front of the Ketchum residence. 

“Yes” he answered but continued “Is there a ‘Misty Waterflower'? 

“Yeah that's me!” 

“Oh good well here's your package. Now sign here!” The middle aged man
told Misty. 

“But I didn't buy or order anything!” Misty sounded as confused as she
really was. 

“What! Hahaha look it's probably your boyfriend or something sending you
a Valentines Day ‘present'” 

‘Present! Huh maybe what he said about...but didn't he say present's
''Um ok I'll sign for it” 

“Ok right on the dotted line, thank you and have a nice day” but before
he left, the delivery man turned around and faced Misty. “Oh I'm sorry 
I forgot something!” 

“Oh? Um ok what is it?” Misty asked 

“The guy who bought this left you a message” barely getting a breather
he continued “I didn't know what it means but he told me to tell you 
this: ‘ told you it'll all make sense.'Yeah that's about it. So you get 
what it means? Um hello? Miss?” 

Hearing this Misty had totally forgotten about the man standing in front
of her. ‘Told you it would all make sense' ‘Oh my god!' “Thanks a lot 
um bye!” she said pretty forwardly. 

“Um ok! Well than have a nice day miss” The delivery man turned and
left. 

Bringing the package inside; Misty opened it. Her eyes suddenly widen in
surprise. There in the box was a brand new bike, it look so similar to 
the one Ash wrecked; it as red, had all the add-ons that she had and a 
little more. But there on the handle bars was another note. 

*********** 

In the forest of Viridian; Pidgey's could be heard singing in the trees.
The sun was now at high noon while a single girl raced through the 
woodland. 

‘I guess this ‘Present' does help me glide' Misty thought as she raced
through the forest, on her new bike, to reach the spot where Misty had 
first meet Ash. “Ash” the red head said while peddling deeper into the 
woods. Misty seemed to keep going and not stop until she hit... 

‘Viridian Lake' she thought while stopping dead in her tracks. ‘Where is
he? This is where it all started' she sighed and sat down on a rock to 
rest. ‘Where is he this is where It all started, I fished Ash out of 
the river next to the waterfall after that he took my...Oh my god! No 
wonder; this isn't where it started' Looks down at the bike ‘guide me' 
“of course where I meet him and that was when Ash took my...Bike!” 

Racing down the river bank like if her life depended on it, actually it
did; her love life. She reached the spot and gasped because on the 
other side of the waterfall was a picnic, yep defiantly a picnic; a 
navy colored cloth spread on the grass with champagne glasses and a 
bottle of...apple cider in the ice bucket (Their jus kids ok) A full 
basket of who knows what and to top it all off their was a stereo 
playing some beautiful French music. 

“Oh wow!” Misty sighed with stars in her eyes “it's so beautiful” After
staring off into space for a while she noticed she had a problem: it's 
on the other side. She groaned annoyed ‘I should have known, I fished 
ash out on the other side of the lake trying to catch a water Pokemon!” 
then it hit her like a stone to the head ‘Water Pokemon; Pokemon, it 
was another one of her presents; maybe it will help!' “What choice do I 
have?” 

So she threw the Pokemon into the lake and a second later out came a . .
. 

“Oh my God!” Misty started to tear up, because in front of her was her
very own...Tentacruel! ‘I just love them! Oh god he is so sweet!' 
giving it a quick hug she jumped on top and commanded it to swim 
forward, thinking he/she might need more training, Misty was surprised 
because at the exact moment she told her command the Tentacruel moved 
‘Oh my god! He even trained it for me!' “He's so sweet!!!” she 
squealed. 

***** <Normal POV> 

Misty arrived on the other side of the river and was looking around the
picnic sit; thinking where her ‘admirer' could be. ‘What? This place is 
empty! Might as well wait. Again!' but before she could take a seat and 
wait for her mystery man, a pair of arms, from behind, wrapped her in a 
hug. 

“Mornin' Myst!” someone blew sexily in her ear. The surprised Misty
instantly blushed. Knowing who it was; her surprised face turned into a 
grin “Hey...Ash!” Misty said knowing exactly who it was. 

“Huh you knew” Ash asked sounding surprised “B-But how?” 

“That's not important!” Misty answered turning around in Ash's arms and
hugging him back. “I can't believe you would do such a thing!” Misty 
starts to cry into Ash's coat “But Why?” 

Ash was nervous but he had to tell her ‘it's now or never' “Misty,
didn't you read the notes? I meant what I said! I want your dreams to 
come true, I want you happy. Basically what I want to say is...” 

“Yes?” Misty asked anxious to what Ash has to say, but on the inside she
knew exactly what Ash was going to stay. 

“Well what I want to say was...” Ash seemed nervous 

“Yes-yes” misty asked 

“Was... we've been friends for a long time right and I just thought...”
Ash changed the subject 

Misty falls over. “WHAT!!!” She got embarrassed of her sudden out burst
but at a time like this; who cares. “Is that it!? All you wanted to 
tell me was that we're friends!” 

“What NO!!!” 

“Well then What!?” 

Ash gathered up all hi courage to say those three words. “I love you!” 

Misty thought she heard wrong “you-you what?!” 

Smirking at how easy that was he said “I love you Misty” 

‘Oh my god' for some reason she was expecting this so before Ash could
say any more she tackled him. Misty tackled Ash into a hug. “Oh god 
Ash, do you know how many sleepless nights I dream of you saying that?” 


“Um... 203?” he answered. 

“Yes two hundred and... Wait a minute how...?” Misty got curious. First
he knew how to make her dreams come true, and then he knew like 
everything about her and now this. “Um Ash?” she asked sweetly. 

“Y-y-yes?” 

“How did you know that?” In the same tone. 

“He he um lucky guess?” 

“OH really?” Her tone was still the same. 

“Y-yeah” 

“Well than...” her tone of voice suddenly changed “Care to try you
luck!!!” 

Grabbing him by his collar she asked again “How did you know that!?” 

“Um your diary?” 

“My what?!” 

“He-he I read you d-d-diary” 

“Ash Ketchum I'm going to kill you!!!” but before she could lay a finger
on Ash; he shouted “I love you!” and closed his eyes waiting for the 
throbbing. After getting none, he peeked at Misty to find her smiling. 

“Huh?” he was confused, but before he could ask why he wasn't in pain
she kissed him. It was quick and simple kiss, but to the two young 
trainers it was love. 

Ash was the first to speak “You know Myst that was my first kiss!” 

“Mine to” and pulled his lips to hers again, but before they could meet
she whispered so soft only Ash could have heard; “I love you too!” and 
then their lips meet. 

***** 

The day went by for the young couple pretty quick, talking, eating,
laughing and just plain enjoying each others presence. Now the sun was 
setting and it was getting dark as the two started home. 

“Misty?” Ash asked his new Girlfriend. 

“Un-Hun?” Was Misty's reply. 

“You still haven't answered my question!” 

Misty looks over to her boyfriend “What question?” 

“How did you know it was me?” 

The girl giggled “It was the last note you left me!” 

Ash joined in on his girlfriends giggling “I guess I made it to obvious
huh?” 

“Yep! Ash?” 

“Yeah?” 

“I love you Ash!” 

“I love you too Misty!” grabbing for each others hands and with one
quick kiss they headed home. 

Narrator: Well that's about it for now, tune in next time to join our
hero's in the land of Pokemon. Oh almost forgot; to those who are 
curious of what the last note said, it went like this: 

^Dear Misty 

This isn't a step, it's a clue/ to whom your love will be. I am sorry I
took so long here are your gift you long forgotten. Can you guess? Yes 
a bike, the one that I owe. Remember now! I'll be waiting now hurry up! 


Ps. do you know me now? ^ 


   


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