|To Dare a Peach (standard:other, 861 words)|
|Author: Finn McKool||Added: Apr 30 2003||Views/Reads: 2191/1449||Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)|
|A piece of flash fiction I threw out. It flows from my fingertips to you fine people out there. Enjoy.|
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story "Yep." "Well?" "Well what?" "Well, what do you want? And don't you go dodgin' this one, cuz I wanna know." I loved the way she'd get irratated and slip outta that strange Ohio accent she picked up and back into that eggs in the fryin' pan crackle of down home, no nonsense, shut up and tell me, way of talkin' we all seem to acquire. Sigh. "Well?" "What do I want?" "Yep. What do you want. Simple question." "No it isn't." "Alright, it isn't. But what do you want?" "You." Tweet
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