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| Bleed on Me (standard:poetry, 66 words) | |||
| Author: Girl_Anonymous | Added: Nov 22 2003 | Views/Reads: 595/0 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
| hi hi! this piece isn't finished yet and needs some work, so any feed back i would deeply appreciate!! thnx!! | |||
Bleed on Me The rain clouds bleed on me this foggy autum day The world in eerie stillness An eternal silence fallen Alone on the road with blood dripping down my face Carress the thoughts in my palm as I walk through the calm Serene sounds pound through me As I watch the dripping blood of a beautiful cloud Bleed on me Cloud Bleed on me.
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