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Heavenly Love (standard:other, 1013 words)
Author: P.D. BrownAdded: Mar 07 2005Views/Reads: 3056/2011Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)
Man meets soul mate through prayer
 



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‘Yeah.' Toby replied. 

‘He's horrible to me. People think we are happy but we are not.' She
screamed down the phone. ‘Sometimes he beats me!' Caroline began to 
cry. 

‘I'm not having that. Tomorrow I'll go buy you tickets down here ok.'
Toby answered realising to himself that finally he could do for 
Caroline what he couldn't do for his mum. The pie burnt to smithereens. 


The next morning he stomped his way to the train station and bought a
return ticket so that she could if wanted, return to her husband. 

Later that day, she responded to his thoughts by ringing him up
specifically asking if he had got the tickets. He told her how he was 
looking at them as they spoke and that she would receive them by post.  
He did not hear from her again until she had received them. Then she 
enlightened him how Herbert almost opened the letter, but she was able 
to grab it out of his hand before he got the chance. 

Every time Caroline rang Toby she was either busy packing her suitcases
or walking off an argument due to the fact that he knew something. She 
had informed him by text that he knew nothing about their plans. Things 
were becoming more dangerous as each suitcase over the matter of days 
was packed. 

His guess was that she was going on holiday as she had so many times
before, little did he know this was going to be the longest holiday 
Caroline was to spend. Eight days of knowing each other had passed when 
Caroline again rang to let Toby know that in the morning she would be 
catching the train. 

Confusion of what he knew, or thought he knew scrambled his mind all
that day. I had sent her a message whilst she was on the train hoping 
that she was journeying down, but not trusting that it would happen for 
he had been so let down so many times.  The time came for Toby to go 
and meet her at the station. He took with him the photo she had sent 
after receiving the tickets.  His hopes were dashed when he discovered 
the transport wasn't there. Toby waited for a moment but nothing 
happened. He then strolled away from the station. 

‘The 15:08 is going to be ten minutes late.' The voice over the intercom
responded. 

He stood on the bridge patient and waiting for the next train to appear.
His weariness remained until he finally saw her step off the train 
encircled with suitcases.  He ran to where she stood. Although a new 
life for both of them was about to begin, little did Caroline know that 
she was an answer to his prayer-you could say she's his angel! 


   


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