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Lord please (standard:poetry, 189 words)
Author: AdrienneAdded: Apr 28 2001Views/Reads: 1669/0Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)
This is a poem (well actually a song) that someone who is very close to me wrote. I had to put it on here to see what you guys think of it. Please read it, it's really good!
 



I dont know how to start 

but let my words come from my heart 

and hopefully you'll see 

how much you mean to me 

just to know that you love me 

if even for only a moment 

makes my life worth living 

and so babe, to you I'm giving 

all of my love, and dear Lord I hope it's enough 

to win her, call me selfish 

she's an angel and I'm a sinner 

I promise to treat her 

the best that i can 

I know I'm just a lowly man 

and she treats me better than I deserve 

I cant even explain it in words 

she makes me me feel like I'm the world 

and even if she leaves 

I would so understand 

but Lord please 

she makes me a better man 

but no matter what happens 

I'm gonna stay this way 

till the day that I die 

and I pray everyday 

that I hope I never make her cry 

so thankyou for showing me heaven on earth 

you've restored my hope and I'm keepin the faith 

thank you for searching inside 

and finding what I've been trying hide


   


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