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Can You See Me? (standard:poetry, 213 words)
Author: SareAdded: Nov 13 2001Views/Reads: 1956/0Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)
Are the eyes truly the windows of the soul? What happens when the curtains are drawn?
 



the eyes are the windows of the soul. 

iíve drawn the curtains, can you see me - can you see me? 

do you see only what i show you or can you see it all? 

can you see me - can you see me? 

do you look into my eyes and see my past, the present, and our future? 

do you see my love? 

do i need to justify my love for you? 

do i need to justify it to you? 

do you see past the curtains? 

can you see me? 

does my soul stand naked behind the windows of my eyes? 

can you see me? 

what is it you see there, what do you see of me? 

why do you look? 

why do you love me? 

can you see me? 

is it that you can see me, see my soul exposed between our eyes? 

is that why you love me? 

can you see me? 

how can i hide from you? 

can you see me? 

where can i go to escape you? 

can you see me? 

who are you, why do you look for me? 

can you see me? 

iím running away from you in fear and shame... will you follow? 

can you see me? 

can you see me? 

can you see me? 


   


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