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I Spy (standard:Psychological fiction, 340 words)
Author: Justin_MullinsAdded: Mar 19 2004Views/Reads: 3357/0Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)
An angry and mentally disturbed young man strikes back at a woman who tormented him in their younger years.
 



I couldn't help to smile as I watched her through a window in the back
of her home as I hid in the bushes. That's the great thing about the 
night. It's dark and that typically worked well in keeping things in 
secret. She had no idea she was being watched. People tend not to 
notice things when they feel safe. 

Thoughts raced through my mind. I had once known her, years ago. Her
name was Jamie, Jamie Davidson. I thought I had left the anger behind 
years ago, but, I was wrong. It was still here. Oh boy, was it still 
here. I just couldn't stand the anger anymore. The anger would never 
die and go away until I did something about it. If I didn't, it would 
just eat at me for eternity. 

She was just another conceited wretch that had lived a so-called perfect
life in her perfect world, stepping on people, that in her opinion, 
weren't good enough to even wash her car. It was time for little miss 
princess to learn that life wasn't always a bowl of cherries. I 
wouldn't allow her to hurt anybody else again like she had done to me 
before. 

I gripped the baseball bat hard. I wasn't that worried about being
caught by the police. By the time they would discover her body, no 
definite connection to me could be made. Of course she would try to 
scream, but, I had that taken care of alright. 

I looked at my watch and smiled again. 8:32 p.m. I was tired of waiting.
It was time I made my move. Making sure no one was around and that she 
wouldn't see me, I slowly entered through the unlocked window. I had 
seen her enter into the kitchen, so, I silently walked in while she had 
her back turned to me. 

She jerked around, sensing something behind her. But, it was already too
late. I raised my bat above her head and swung it as hard as I could 
towards her head.....


   


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