|Why Can't We Be Forgiven? (standard:other, 509 words)|
|Author: Lori||Added: May 09 2004||Views/Reads: 1836/0||Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)|
|Re-worked it some, let me know what you think. Editing is still new to me. Feedback is always welcome, if you feel you need to say something, write to me.|
Why Can't We Be Forgiven By: cowgirl_11 I've wondered why it takes so long for a man to forgive a woman. It's like pulling a man's teeth to get him to utter the words “You're forgiven.” They seem to be the worst words in a man's vocabulary. Men need to accept that women aren't perfect. No matter how many times you say you are, no matter how many ways you try to show us that you are. Men aren't perfect women are the same way. I wrote a story a couple of days ago. It was the way I was feeling at the time. When I wrote it, I meant everything I said. I was trying to write about the pain I had at the time. The best way for me to do this is to write it down then forget about it. But, I have a bad problem. I don't re-read my words. When I'm through with a story, I hit the spell and grammar check, if something needs to be changed I do it. If it all seems ok, I submit it. If I go back and read it, I want to change it. I will rework it until it doesn't resemble the story I started with I don't like doing that. How I will ever publish a novel I don't know! But that's the way I write. Any ways, sorry I got sidetracked, I wrote the story. It didn't sit well with the person I wrote about. He didn't like it; I wasn't looking for his approval. When I didn't get it, I found out it was important to have it. Yes, I know it sounds crazy, I didn't think his opinion even mattered any more I learned that it did. He hasn't talked to me since, I asked him not to read it. But, only after I told him that it was okay to read it. I got scared and got offline, went to bed, didn't think about it at all. I knew if I did it would drive me insane. He has taken a story and turned it into a big deal, won't even tell me what he thought. He won't look at it from my point of view, just got his feelings hurt and is taking it out on me. He should know that I didn't mean anything by it. It was my pain talking, not me. I was just lashing out, not at him but the pain I felt. He won't private message me now, won't talk to me in a chat room, if I happen to be in the same one he's in. I did write him an email telling him that I'm sorry, no answer there either. Since I wrote the stupid story, I've been getting hang up calls every day, sometimes more than once a day. My phone number isn't widely known; it's not a published number. I have a feeling it's him, just can‘t prove it. I'm probably worried about nothing; in a few days he'll forgive me. Tweet
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