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A New Beginning (standard:non fiction, 911 words)
Author: Mentally Disturbed TeenagerAdded: Jan 01 2001Views/Reads: 2474/1395Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)
This story is what happens when someone is willing to do anything for a person that they love. First Draft of my story, construtive critism greatly appreciated.
 



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see the keyboard, almost.  Even after the guy had to get off, she 
stayed up, and made a list of New Year's Resolutions.  The first two, 
were that she would never do drugs, and that she would try her hardest 
to stop drinking.  She didn't want to mess up her life, when it was 
just starting. 

"It was a list of little thing she could do, that would help her life a
lot.  Every one she wrote down was something she could keep." I looked 
up at the shrink, sitting in her chair.  "That bottle was full a little 
over a month ago.  The vodka is proof 80." 

The shrink looked at how low the level was.  I closed my eyes again, and
started crying silently. 

"The girl in that story was me." 

New Year's Resolutions. I will never do drugs. I will try my hardest to
stop drinking. I will do all my homework every night. I will still be 
friends with my ex-boyfriend. I will read at least one novel a week. I 
will use the treadmill 15-min a day, at least. I will try to get along 
with my brother. I will go to church every Sunday. I won't complain 
about church. I will ignore people who irratate me. I will try to 
succeed in school. I will practice piano 3 times a week. I will e-mail 
my grandparents once a week. I will call my best friend once a week. I 
will read the news. I will pamper my cat.


   


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