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Moments of Life (youngsters:poetry, 188 words)
Author: fissAdded: Jul 18 2004Views/Reads: 3319/0Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)
This is just a short poem I wrote (it was LA homework). I hope you enjoy it and correct me so i can improve.
 



If only 

By Linda Wu 05/16/04 

If only in our lives We can make magic real The magical powers in
fantasies Magic that makes our world ideal Magic which grows lovely 
stories And most of all the magic of love 

If only in our lives We can live with care for Everyone, that together
gives Peace to the world. If people can just soften Those hearts made 
of stone, Maybe they can put forth A bit more of their love And hear 
the whispers Of the speaking truth. 

If only in our lives We can find our dreams with our own courage And
shine our light beams Onto those who lacks bravery, Listen to what 
other's hearts Are trying to say, and Tell others how you really feel 
Before it's too late. 

If only in our lives Peace always comes with victory For we don't need
victory when there's peace But we do need peace when there's victory. 

If only in our lives We don't think of any if-only's And if only in our
lives The if only's of all if only's Can be made true. If only. 


   


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