Click here for nice stories main menu

main menu   |   standard categories   |   authors   |   new stories   |   search   |   links   |   settings   |   author tools


Ten Days (standard:poetry, 107 words)
Author: A.J. SuttonAdded: Oct 20 2004Views/Reads: 1696/0Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)
Just a poem I did in my free time. It is a little bit of fantasy but not too much.
 



Ten days he lay at the bottom, His lips kissing the ground, He was in
the void, no movement, no light, No thing to make a sound, 

These wounds he had no longer burned, or the pain he now didn't feel,
His only pain was that of his soul, This was the only pain he knew as 
real, 

Ages passed or so it seemed, But ten days had only spanned, The village
was gone, no soul was left, Th hero clinched his hand, 

None could feel the pain he felt, As he laid upon the floor, For only
after ten days, All he knew became no more


   


Authors appreciate feedback!
Please vote, and write to the authors to tell them what you liked or didn't like about the story!
A.J. Sutton has 7 active stories on this site.
Profile for A.J. Sutton, incl. all stories
Due to abuse, voting is disabled.

stories in "poetry"   |   all stories by "A.J. Sutton"  






Nice Stories @ nicestories.com, support email: nice at nicestories dot com
Powered by StoryEngine v1.00 © 2000-2014 - Artware Internet Consultancy BV