|Of Love and Revenge .. (standard:romance, 1475 words)|
|Author: Cryptic Writings||Added: Nov 03 2004||Views/Reads: 3211/1354||Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)|
|Rejected by the girl he loves, he commits suicide .. then comes back in the form of a devil for revenge.. you're gonna like this one ..|
She was great and I loved her, I could do nothing but loving her .. I loved her as no one loved before .. she was an angel .. I can never find words to describe her .. I could do anything to see the charm of her eyes .. I would die for her smile.. I would kill for a word from her .. I love her .. I adore her .. she's the best thing that ever happened to me , she's gorgeous .. in other words.. she's perfect .. but she was experiencing the most complex emotions in her lifetime.. she was blocking me which fed the depression and pain that kept growing greater and greater inside my heart .. I finally fed up and couldn't take it any longer .. she was the only hope I ever had for happiness.. this hope kept on getting weaker and weaker with time until its dead .. I made up my mind .. I looked at her .. I took her to my hand .. I kissed her then put her over my wrist and gently moved her back and forth.. it was a kind of nice feeling of pain I felt as blood flew like a little stream out of my hand .. I felt pain and weakness running all over my body, but the pain of my heart was much bigger .. a weird haze hit my eyes and I started to shiver .. sweat rolled all over my body and things faded away slowly .. I died .. It's too hot over here .. I opened my eyes and found myself in a large hall with fire burning everywhere.. everything was set on fire .. the floor, the ceiling , the walls , the chairs the tables even the bed I was tied to .. I wondered where am I ? what am I doing here ? I screamed .. Afterwards, a huge creature came in .. I could recognize that he's a daemon.. he himself was a piece of burning fire .. he's got the ugliest face I've ever seen .. hair covered all of his head and body as well , with a pair of horns centers his head .. and a large neck compared to his huge body and a tail that ends with a spear-shaped head .. his voice sounded like a snake .. he said : “Welcome to hell loser, I'm your god now .” I knew that I've been sent down to hell after my death .. I didn't care .. I have nothing more to lose .. He approached to me and I could see the evil sparks inside his round eyes .. I felt pain in my hands that were tightly tied to the bed I was laying on .. I tried to move but I couldn't .. he was getting closer and closer till I felt his hot breaths on my face .. He raised his hands and I saw his long and sharp fingertips.. he stick his hand in my chest violently and took out my red heart .. and a large scream got out from my very being .. he stick his hand in his chest and took out his black burning heart and put it in my chest .. then he left saying “Revenge .. Revenge .. Revenge ..” with his nasty diabolic voice. I felt nothing and went in a coma .. As I woke up .. I found myself in a pile of garbage bags.. everything in me hurts and I have the word “Revenge” buzzing in my ears .. I found an old broken mirror and looked at my face and I could see two couplings on my head .. I touched my face.. it was so rough as well as my hands and whole body .. and I saw the traces of blood on my left hand .. that daemon had turned me to a devil seeking revenge with his black heart .. There was a couple of homeless people searching the garbage for food .. I realized that they can't see me .. I didn't know what to do , but a great feeling of evil revenge grew inside my heart like an addict that needs drugs to feel better .. then suddenly a black hole appeared in the ground and tongues of fire raised from its bottom and a line of fire got out and morphed to the daemon's face .. he said : - “have your revenge now .. use the powers I granted to you to do your task .. you're immortal .. nothing can kill you till you perform your mission .. you have the ability to show her yourself .. but watch out .. if anybody else saw you .. you'll be sent back to hell and suffer its torture forever .. go ahead .. have your revenge so you can rest in piece forever.. go ahead .. have your revenge .. have your revenge” then his voice faded away and the hole started to close .. - “Wait .. don't go .. please don't go ..” Click here to read the rest of this story (63 more lines)
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