|Bruised Heart Lashes Out (standard:poetry, 80 words)|
|Author: Lori||Added: Apr 26 2008||Views/Reads: 1406/0||Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)|
|A poem about a couple coming to terms with a relationship being over.|
Bruised Heart Lashes Out ~ An adulteress prays with her heart ripped out of her chest. But instead of guidance she prays for deliverance. ~ An adulterer prays with his mind closed to new possibilities. Instead of righteousness he prays for life without guilt. ~ She longs to die. He longs to suffer. She wants comforting grace. He wants to be a saint. ~ What do they have in common? They've both made “mistakes.” © April 14, 2008 by Lori Tweet
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