|Betrayal (standard:poetry, 39 words)|
|Author: Lori||Added: Apr 29 2008||Views/Reads: 1530/0||Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)|
|An ambiguous poem about another type of love.|
Betrayal Sunlight's gone, see the rain, drowns out the night. Bird of prey circles, waits for the last breath. Watches the life leave her eyes, hawk pounces. The prey lays down and surrenders. © March 15, 2008 by Lori Tweet
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