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Soul Math (standard:poetry, 27 words)
Author: LoriAdded: May 22 2008Views/Reads: 1701/0Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)
First, it's a spiritual poem. Second, have you ever written something that amazed your own self? This is the poem which shocked the socks right off my body. I would LOVE feedback on it!
 



Soul Math 

Two boards, 

four nails, 

one crown of thorns. 

How heavy is your burden 

when you compare it to 

His? 

© May 20, 2008 by Lori


   


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