|A Never Changing World (standard:poetry, 67 words)|
|Author: Lori||Added: Oct 08 2008||Views/Reads: 1399/0||Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)|
|Often times the only person who can really "see" you is the person who loves you the most.|
A Never Changing World A band of gold stops our love cold. Wedding vows of the past takes our souls. Oh I wish I could alter the oath and replace the ring. But to do so wouldn't change a thing. For you would still be a man the world could see. And I would still be seen in your eyes only. © September 13, 2008 by Lori Tweet
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