|Wonders (standard:poetry, 154 words)|
|Author: BlindAngel||Added: Mar 21 2001||Views/Reads: 2463/0||Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)|
|Kind of hard to say what its about, just read it. feedback appreciated.|
what would it be like if we all wondered in clear light? kept no thoughts our own, if we didn't always walk in shadows paranoid of things that will never be if all we spoke was our own if we were all united, not a stanger among us uniformed and engineered to perfection your life not just your own, would this complete lack of differences be a paradise or a hell a life without surprise or change everything predictable but everything unknown your achievments not just yours anymore when someone laughed or mourned so would all the world a death in one family would be a death in all each generation new and improved and yet the same personal no longer a word and marriages arranged by people you've never met yet strangely know every face familiar yet never seen before all this could come to be if we all wondered in clear light Tweet
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