|One or Two (standard:Flash, 224 words)|
|Author: BENTLINK||Added: Feb 24 2012||Views/Reads: 1587/0||Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)|
|Flash story about shopping for what you want.|
One or Two Muted foot falls were heard inside the apartment after the first twist of the door bell. When Heather rang, again, the door swung inward and she stood facing a most attractive young woman. “I'm here to” Heather began. The young woman pressed a forefinger to her lips and made a shushing sound then in a soft not at all unpleasant whisper said, “Look them all over. Every one has its papers and shots. Just pick out one or two you like the looks of and get gone. “My goodness Heather exclaimed I did not expect to have this many to choose from. Are you really sure, you want to part with all of them? I mean they are so cute that I just want to grab them up and hug them.” “Look lady I'm not fooling around here. The deal is a thousand cash each. I need you to pick one or if you would like take two but I need to be rid of all of them by the end of this week. Otherwise, the price would be a lot more. If you have shopped around you know this is the truth. This is the deal of a lifetime for you and the price is this low only because we are moving into a new place that doesn't allow kids.” Tweet
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