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Par for the Course (standard:drama, 2156 words)
Author: CyranoAdded: Mar 16 2012Views/Reads: 1759/1043Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)
It has been a year since Dennis O'Conner lost his wife after having a brain aneurism. He passes his time at the Bodega Bay Golf Club, between hitting gold balls and attending to mundane activities as club secretary, nothing much happens until one, stormy

A dawn stiff westerly brings steeping rain in across the bay and over
the practice area of the Bodega Bay Golf Club, the boundaries of which 
extend down to the high water mark, and with barely enough light a lone 
figure pounds golf balls towards the shoreline from the crest of a 
knoll next to the wood; its trees full of sound: commotions of crows, 
rain dripping onto leaves and from time to time stronger gusts of wind 
causes branches to bend and creak. The rain saturates the man's jacket, 
seeping down the sleeves of his shirt to where his hands now struggle 
to grip the club. But Dennis O'Conner keeps right on hitting golf 

Not long out of his bed, his preparation for practice has been nothing
more than two sips at coffee and a bite of toast. Chilled and 
unprepared, these first few shots jar his hands and some minutes pass 
before he feels that perfect contact between steel and ball, watching 
in quiet satisfaction as the ball curves away in a long lazy arc before 
plunging back to earth a couple of paces from the practice pin. It's a 
perfectly struck shot. Rain tips from his Tilley as he reaches into the 
shag-bag for yet another ball. 

Her image, the memory that has haunted him through the night, is
relegated to the back of his mind while dispatching a succession of 
white balls into the restless Sonoma sky. For over an hour he 
practices, thinking of little else other than grip, alignment, tempo, 
and takeaway. 

“It will take time. Time is a great healer,” the doctor had told him. 

Kindly platitudes hadn't made it any easier. For months now he'd kept
asking himself how long it might be until there is no need to kill 
early morning hours watching old runs of Lucy or black and white movies 
on the TV. 

He gathers up his clubs and begins the dogged process of collecting the
balls into the shag-bag before winding his way back to the clubhouse, 
tossing his gear into his old 4 x 4, parked in the slot reserved for 
the club secretary, and slams down the tailgate; his eyes drawn toward 
the clubhouse roof, watching water spill from a broken gutter. When 
built the clubhouse had been the proud symbol of a prosperous community 
but since those heady days, and especially in the last several years, 
it had been unloved and neglected. He enters through the changing room, 
toweling his hair and pulling on a dry shirt and socks. 

Sadie, acting as temporary bar staff, wife of the club treasurer, puts
her stock sheet aside and thrusts a mug of coffee into his bluish 

“Here, you'll be needing this,” she says. “You want your head examined
out there in this weather... and only practicing! It isn't as though 
you're going to play in the Masters.” 

He smiles, as usual, the courteous smile that is his mask. 

Sadie considers Dennis to be an equable and calm chap. Maybe too calm,
too much in control. He's a man who wears a veil that is never lifted, 
not in the clubhouse at least.  Having things to attend to she spins 
away, practicing a few slick line dancing moves en-route to the 

James carries his coffee to a pine door with the word ‘secretary'
embossed in faded gilt. Inside is just enough space to accommodate a 
desk, filing cabinet, and computer. The shelves cling to the walls 
under the weight of arch lever files with faded covers and dusty tops. 
He stares at the coffee Sadie has made and, knowing what to expect, 
opens the window enough to tip it away before flicking absentmindedly 
through his diary. Entries begin on the first day of April. April 
Fools' Day; the first day he'd eased into this chair. 

The administration is straightforward enough. Once a partner of a
merchant bank he'd got used to snapping his fingers and watching people 
jump. Not any longer. There's no point harboring doubts about 
retirement. This is the change in direction he'd sought. The new house 
is almost fixed; over budget, fortunate that money is not a problem, 
Dennis leads a good level of social life, on nodding terms with many of 
the town's hierarchy and backslapping terms with a grand circle of 

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