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| Author: Cloud Strife | Added: Jul 30 2003 | Views/Reads: 3767/2609 | Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes) |
| A story about three men, a battle between two kingdoms and the discovery of a rare book in the most unlikely place that changes a world forever | |||
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and spoke, “Do not fear of the battle Loneth for you are a brave and
true warrior and if that does not give you solace then remember the
prophecy and rejoice at our imminent victory”. “Yes, the prophecy”,
murmured Loneth as his gaze returned to the Courtyard. He still feared
the battle and did not want to leave the castle or his wife but knew
that the call to march into the West would come before long.
· Broma finished his daily prayers at the chapel just as the priests
were arriving to say mass and returned to his quarters in the heart of
the castle. He unsheathed his sword and began to study it as it shone
brightly in the midday light. He dealt mortal blows to imaginary
enemies before his thoughts turned to his deceased father, Maerhta.
The sword had been his father's before he had been killed in the last
battle with the enemy. Broma realised that the battle had been more
than fifteen seasons ago. He had been very young at the time and had
always been told that his father was a mighty man on the battlefield
who had inspired confidence and courage among his comrades and sent
fear down the spine of the enemy. He had by most accounts in that
battle taken the lives of a dozen or more before he too had succumbed
to death. His father was considered a hero and Broma wanted so much to
live up to his fathers name and do his best for his people in the
forthcoming battle. He longed for the chance to prove himself worthy
as a warrior and knew that he would soon get his wish. As he squeezed
the hilt of the sword and felt the awesome power that ran through the
weapon he did not doubt that the stories of Maerhta were true. He could
almost see the man in battle before him now. Broma was a deeply
superstitious young man and believed that his father's strength still
ran through the mighty sword and would help him in battle. They were
an evil and twisted people whom he would be facing and for the sake of
a peaceful future for the Kingdom they needed to defeat the enemy once
and for all. Broma placed the sword back into its sheath and laid it
down gently on his bed as if it were a priceless artefact. “With this
sword I will avenge you Father”, he whispered before going to the great
meeting hall of the castle to be present at the council of war.
· Greyna had managed to sneak back into the great city of Lethsor one
stormy night and right under the noses of the guards who were on sentry
duty. He had even impressed himself with his skill in accomplishing
the feat. The day before while he was journeying on the road to
Lethsor he had seen a plume of smoke rising high above the treetops
from the way he had come. He realised that the peasants from Yeda had
burned down his old hovel in anger when they discovered what he had
done before leaving. Greyna had a day's start on the peasants now and
believed rightly that they would not try to follow him. All the same
though he picked up his pace considerably for the remainder of the
journey. He had bled the poor town dry on the morning he left there.
He had enough coins on him now to last well over a week. The trouble
for him from this point on however would be to remain unseen and
uncaptured inside the city. But he was confident and believed that he
would not have trouble in avoiding any unwanted attention. He
considered himself a very good thief. The next day after dawn broke he
got his first glimpse of the city in over eight moons. It was just as
he remembered it. There rose high into the sky huge buildings that
spiralled as far as the eye could see and before him swept the dusty,
winding streets that he knew so well from old. It was all there and at
the centre of the huge city would be the market of Dalgor, the largest
in the world, which thronged with merchants who Greyna believed, had
too much money to spend and not enough sense or care to deserve it. He
headed straight towards the market with a newly found spring in his
step that had been lost for some time. It's good to be home he thought
as a smile spread across his face. For the next few weeks he slipped
effortlessly back into his old role of conning money from anyone who
was gullible enough, stealing money from the merchants who frequented
the market and stealing food and other goods from the numerous stalls.
He was not all bad though and when sometimes he had food to spare he
shared it with others living on the streets like himself. This did not
happen often though as it was a relatively lean time for Greyna because
people were more cautious of thieves than eight moons previously when
he had left the city. He was surprised to find that there were visibly
more guards patrolling the market and the rest of the city for that
matter to protect the people of Lethsor from those like Greyna. This
was one of King Ronaths ideas to find favour with his people. The
market of Dalgor was becoming a safer place, as more and more thieves
were being taken off the streets never to be seen again. Greyna soon
learned this upon his return but it did not deter him for he had one
fault in that he was overly confident. This was the reason why he had
always been caught before and it wasn't long until he began taking
unnecessary and foolish risks like stealing too much from one place
before moving on despite the fact that he was under threat of death and
sure enough on one occasion he slipped up. The owner of a stall saw him
as he pocketed an amulet on a sweltering afternoon at market. The
stall owner had noticed him hanging around and had been keeping an eye
on him. “Thief”, he shouted at the top of his voice and pointing at
Greyna. “That man stole an amulet!” “You there”, called a nearby
Palace Guard. “Halt in the name of King Ronath!” Greyna had no choice
but to run as fast as he could from the scene because he would now be
running for his very life. He pushed and shoved his way through the
crowd with the guard right behind him. He headed out of the square and
tried to lose his pursuer in the labyrinth of narrow streets in the
slums which he knew like the back of his hand. The route he took meant
that they were climbing up all the time to a higher level of the city
and to Greyna's dismay he found that he could not outrun the guard. The
guard was almost on top of him as he burst out into an opening where
about twenty yards ahead there was a sheer drop of more than thirty
feet to the street below. Greyna knew this place and had his eyes
locked on a large opening in the derelict building opposite them. It
was a jump of four or five yards. Just at the instant when Greyna was
preparing to make the jump the guard managed to grab his shoulder from
behind and shout, “Now I've got you thief”. Greyna was completely put
off by this and subsequently was not able to jump as far as he had
needed. He crashed into the bruisingly hard stonewall on the other
side and being just able to hang on to the rough stone for his life
managed to claw his way up a few feet and through the jagged opening in
the stonework. The guard had not made the jump. He had been trying so
hard to make up the ground on Greyna that he had not noticed the drop
ahead and had fallen to his death on the street below with a sickening
crunch. There was already a growing crowd around the body as Greyna
peered down. He was badly hurt but needed to make ground away from the
scene and as soon as possible because he knew that many had seen him
during the escape and would be able to give a description of him to the
Palace Guards as rewards were often offered for information in these
situations. Murder was still a common occurrence in the city even if
theft had been almost eradicated. He would be killed for the death of
the guard but when it emerged that he had already been under threat of
death for other crimes he knew that he would suffer the most horrible
and cruel fate that could be imagined by the King or anyone else.
Visions of awful torturing devices swam through his mind as he made his
way out of the derelict building, and hobbled through the winding
streets away from the scene of the crime as fast as he could. His right
knee and ankle were badly hurt though and he soon realised that he
could not continue much further on foot. Instead he quickly and
cunningly decided upon another plan. He knew he was in an old section
of the city and that mostly elderly people lived there. He would enter
a house and kill its inhabitants so he could rest up for a few days
until the hunt for him had died down. With this in mind he approached
a small and weather-beaten door, which he knocked on softly. Shortly
afterwards an ancient looking man with a long, thin beard answered. “
Hello friend”, spoke Greyna in what he hoped was a pitiful voice.
“I have travelled far and will gladly pay if you allow me to rest here
awhile”. “You may stay my friend and need not part with coin for I
live alone and seldom have visitors these days, I would relish some
company for awhile”, croaked the old man. Greyna's eyes lit up with
wicked intent at these words. “Come in and close the door after you”,
called the man walking back towards his chair by the fire. “My name is
Felyar, make yourself at home here by the fire and tell me something of
your journeys. I too have travelled far in the past you know but do
not see much of the world nowadays”. Suddenly the old man felt an
excruciating pain shoot through his back and looking down at his chest
saw the tip of a blade emerge through his garments, which were
beginning to turn from a dull white to a rich crimson. “I am sorry
Felyar”, came a voice from behind, “but I'm in a lot of trouble at the
moment and you will soon live again in heaven”. At these words Felyar
groaned and began to sway violently. He coughed up blood and fell
forward onto the floor. He did not stir again. Greyna was truly sorry
for what he had done to the old man but believed that it had been the
only thing to do given the unusual circumstances. It was better to
have the old man out of the way as that put Greyna back in control of
the situation and as soon as he had convinced himself of this he felt
much better. He was back on track now and felt that he was surely
going to escape the death that would have befallen him had he been
caught. He was his old self again and when that feeling came back so
too did his old thoughts and instincts. He would have to stay in the
house for about a week for his injuries to heal and the hunt for him to
die down before he could hope to leave. He would leave Lethsor for
good this time but in the meantime he went about ritually searching
through Felyar's belongings for anything of value, which he could use
or sell on his upcoming journey. The old man had collected quite a lot
of junk during his life and most of it was stored in a small room at
the back of the small house. Greyna's keen eyes quickly deduced that
most of it was worthless but beneath a small pile of old clothes in a
corner of the room there was a medium sized chest made of a very old
and tough wood. It was locked of course. Greyna wondered what the old
man had that needed to be locked away and hidden from prying eyes and
so he methodically and patiently set about trying to unlock it. The sun
had gone down and been replaced by a magnificent full moon by the time
he managed to get the chest open. When it finally opened it was with
protesting creaks and groans, which told Greyna that nobody had
glimpsed inside of the chest in a long, long time. When Greyna finally
peered in his breath was taken away completely and utterly. He could
not have dreamed of such a find. There were more coins in there than
he had seen in his entire life but for once the thief was not
interested in coins because their was something else in there that was
even more valuable. It was perhaps the most valuable thing in the
entire world. “Where did the old man get this?” he said to himself.
“It must be the only one left in the world”. It was a book. It was by
the look of it an ancient book. But it was not just an ordinary book.
It had a thick black binding made of some tough material that may have
been stretched skin. On the cover was a fierce looking green dragon
with a golden ring about its neck and flames bellowing forth from its
mouth. It was the mystical symbol of the lost art of magic. This was
a book of spells. Greyna did not understand how the old man could
possibly have come across it. Five generations before Greyna had even
been born the reigning King of the Great City of Lethsor had been a man
named Galres the Mighty. Galres was a powerful warrior who was
respected by his people but he had always feared those who could wield
the art of magic for it was a power which he not control or even
understand. He had feared their power so much that he had ordered a
number of magicians and other spell makers killed and all written
documents relating to the art were destroyed. It had been a bloody
time in the history of Lethsor and afterwards it was believed that the
art had disappeared forever. Due to the savagery of the persecution of
magicians during the period it had been considered even up to Greynas
time as one of the most embarrassing incidents in Lethsors history and
was rarely discussed though of course everyone knew the story. So
Greyna quivered with excitement at his find as he blew dust from the
cover and leafed through the torn and yellowing pages of the book.
What spells awaited his command? What power could he wield? His eyes
fell almost immediately upon a spell that set his heart racing even
faster than before. This was a spell which could transport him to
other worlds.
· The battle had been raging for hours on the plains of Chardra, located
about two hundred spans west of Pertha. The Perthans had at first been
taken completely by surprise to find that their enemies the Granthans
had been marching on them aswell because open conflict between the two
armies had not been anticipated. It had been the Perthans plan to lay
siege to the Granthans castle and when the rations of their enemies
were growing short to storm the castle and finish them off. It
appeared however that the Granthans had been planning a similar
strategy. Despite both sides initial surprise it was a particularly
fierce and bloody battle that took place that day.
The Perthans however began to gain the upper hand as the battle raged on
throughout the day. While both sides had similar numbers of about five
thousand men apiece the Perthans appeared to be more organised in their
ranks and more fearless against the enemy. In the midst of the Perthan
ranks was Loneth who was fighting like a man possessed as he wielded
his sword and drove through the enemy with unstoppable force. He was
feeling the exultation of battle, which he had heard about from some of
the older and more experienced soldiers. “You become like a different
person”, they had said to him around the campfire the night before.
“It's almost like a trance. The graceful movement of your sword
through the air and the glorious sound of the death agonies of your
enemy are in those moments the most beautiful things that can possibly
be imagined. The red blood of your enemy spilling to the ground
consumes you with a feeling that is half madness and half ecstasy”.
Loneth's armour was covered in blood as he cut his way through the
Granthan ranks.
· Broma too was fighting bravely with his father's sword. It seemed to
be a part of him. It was controlling him as enemy after enemy fell
dead to the ground before him. Some of his strength ebbed away however
when he saw the opponent who now stood facing him just yards away with
a mighty sword gripped tightly in his right hand. The man was tall and
broad shouldered with armour that was completely covered in blood. It
was the blood of Broma's people. This thought filled him with rage.
He called out to his father for courage as he charged at the beast
before him. His opponent blocked the first volley of slashes cleanly.
Broma himself was then forced to deflect a number of slashes but
finally managed to smash his shield into his opponents face and use the
time that this brought him to inflict a mortal blow on him. The man
was stabbed fiercely straight through the chest. As Broma pulled his
sword back with all his strength the opponent stood bravely for a few
moments and tried to summon the strength for a final charge at Broma
but suddenly the sword fell from his hands and he sank slowly to his
knees.
· Loneth had never known that pain could exist as that which he now
felt. He tried to stay on his feet and charge again at the Granthan
warrior but the pain was simply too great to bear. He sank to his
knees and put his hand to the wound in his chest. He knew that he was
dying when he saw the blood flowing profusely from the wound and
mingling with that, which had been collected from those he himself had
already killed. Loneth summoned up the picture of his wife Aertha in
his mind and began to cry at the thought that he would never see her
again. He would also never live to see his child and hoped that he or
she would grow up to be a better person than he had been or at least
not die like he would very soon on these plains. His head was growing
light and the colours of the battlefield were beginning to lose clarity
and focus when the man who had done this to him approached. Loneth who
was now struggling to breathe had his eyes fixed on the boots of the
man who now walked slowly forward. Broma stopped about three feet from
him. With extraordinary courage Loneth forced his eyes from the man's
boots up to his face so that he may die with honour looking into the
eyes of his enemy. He looked into the face of the Granthan warrior
before him and in the instant before his head was cut from his body he
thought that the Granthan wasn't a monster at all as Loneth had always
been told. He was a man. He was nothing more than a scared young man.
· An instant later there shone a dazzlingly white light in the sky just
above the battlefield, which caused fighting to cease momentarily.
When the light had faded there was a man standing on the battlefield in
dirty and strange looking clothes who had not been there before. “The
prophecy has come true”, shouted one of the Perthans to his comrades.
“It is the lord Amoseth. He has come down from heaven to lead us to
victory”. With this realisation the Perthans fought with vigour even
greater than before. The Granthans courage immediately disappeared and
quite soon each and every one of them including the brave young warrior
Broma had been killed without mercy. The stranger who had appeared did
little more than stir during the proceedings as he stared at those
before him with an expression of bewilderment and horror at the
unfolding barbaric spectacle of the battle.
· As soon as the victorious army arrived back in Pertha the next day
after a gruelling march home a huge feast took place in the main hall
of the castle. It was a celebration the likes of which had never been
seen before in the Kingdom and on a large marble chair next to the King
and Queen sat the quiet form of the man who had appeared from the sky
during battle. The people ate and drank and toasted the Lord Amoseth
for granting them victory. However a hush grew as the King rose and
gestured to the crowd for silence. “Oh great and mighty Lord Amoseth”,
he began, “You came down from heaven and in our hour of need you helped
us to vanquish our enemies. What do you now require of us? How may we
serve you?”
· Greyna stood up before a hall filled with hundreds and hundreds of
people on their knees before him. He did not understand anything that
had been said since he came to this strange place as the people spoke a
language he was unfamiliar with. The rich blue coloured sky of his
world had been replaced here by a beautiful pale orange which looked
incredible and even frightening to him. None of the land he had been
brought through by these people since he came from Felyar's house was
familiar to him. He knew that the spell had worked and had at first
been scared not knowing what was happening around him but here in the
castle he had finally seen. The man who is standing beside me is
clearly a King he thought and he and all the rest seem to be
worshipping me. They think I am some kind of God. This caused him to
laugh hysterically at the audience before him. “My servants, my loyal
servants”, he shouted at the top of his voice. “I am Greyna the
traveller and conqueror of worlds. Give me riches. Give me all the
gold and jewels in your kingdom and worship me always”.
· At these words a change appeared to take place in the crowd. The King
rose to his feet and turned to address them. “It was foretold that the
Lord Amoseth would come to us and give us the strength to defeat our
enemies in battle. As you have seen this has indeed come to pass. It
was also foretold that when the Lord Amoseth spoke to us in the lost
language of Nirmalore used by our ancestors during the Golden Age of
our history that we would take him to the Stone of Dalmeer. Do any of
you before me here doubt that he has spoken in the forgotten tongue?”
There was no movement from the large crowd. “Very well then, at the
break of day tomorrow on what will be a truly glorious day in our
history we will journey to the Stone of Dalmeer”. The crowd were
delighted by the news that they would be going soon to the Stone of
Dalmeer and every parent made sure that they and their children went to
bed early that night so as to be awake and ready to leave for the stone
at the break of dawn.
· At dawn the next morning Greyna was awakened from sleep and dressed in
fine robes before being ushered from the luxurious room where he had
passed the night. He was seated on an extravagantly crafted golden
throne, which was carried by eight men. It looked as though wherever
he was going today, every man, woman and child in the Kingdom were
going aswell. Greyna for his part did not know or even care where he
was going. I am going to live here as a God for the rest of my days
and what a life I'll lead he thought. They journeyed outside the city
walls through a dense wooded area towards a hill. When they reached it
and began the ascent Greyna noticed that the hill was surprisingly high
but it mattered little to him as he was still being carried on his
throne. At the top of this hill there was a huge clearing, which was
big enough to accommodate everyone who had made the journey.
· A tall, thin and very pale skinned man began to address the crowd.
“People of Pertha yesterday we saw the prophecies of old come true”,
shouted the normally placid priest Dernoth. “Now as you know it is
time for us to give Lord Amoseth back his immortal life so he can once
again watch over us from heaven and protect us until the end of time”.
Wild cheers erupted from the masses at these words. “And even though
we lost many friends in battle recently”, Dernoth went on thinking of
Loneth among others, “that does not take away from the splendour of our
victory and the eternal happiness awaiting us all. Let all hail
Amoseth”, he bellowed. “All hail Amoseth”, answered the masses.
· Greyna did not have any idea what was happening and was surprised to
find that he was suddenly being lifted up and passed along by the
cheering and smiling crowd beneath. “Look how they adore me”, he
laughed. “I truly have become a God here in this land”. He was
presently allowed back down onto his feet. Two men came to him and led
him forward to something that he had not seen before. It was a huge
flat stone about eight feet long, four feet wide and three feet high
off the ground. He was laid gently on the stone but began to struggle
when he saw that his hands and feet were being tied down. His
struggles proved too late and soon the deed was done. He was trapped.
With panic rising quickly inside him he fought in vain to break the
bonds that held him but quickly found that they were too strong. There
was nothing left for him to do except to try futilely again and again
to break the bonds and agonise over what was now in store for him. He
couldn't understand why this was happening and began shouting furiously
at the onlookers to be released. His shouts and screams soon turned to
whimpers though as the tall figure slowly approached him. The man wore
a shimmering black cloak from which he now pulled a long, cruel looking
dagger that gleamed in the light. Greyna's blood froze instantly in
his veins at its sight. The man inspired a raw terror in Greyna that
was primal and fierce and threatened to stop his heart completely in
sheer terror. It was mostly due to the wide and crazed blue eyes of
the evil figure before him. He became hysterical as he saw the
murderous glint in those eyes and turning to the crowd for help as they
closed in around him he realised that there was none left as they all
too had the same maniacal glint and bloodlust in their eyes. It was
over for him. He knew he was going to die. “Please God forgive me for
all I have done”, he whispered shutting his eyes tightly and knowing
that the end was coming. “Lord Amoseth we will now take your mortal
life as you lie before us on the sacred Stone of Dalmeer and in so
doing restore onto you eternal life”, spoke the priest Dernoth to the
shivering form below him. “For as the wise magician Dalmeer foretold
long ago the people of Pertha would enjoy a peaceful and prosperous
existence free from all evil forever when this act was accomplished.
We thank you for the sacrifice that you now freely make to us and
rejoice in the fact that we will one day be a part of your glorious
Kingdom in heaven. May you reign there over all until the end of
time.” Greyna shivered uncontrollably as the man came closer and as the
knife was pressed into his frantically beating heart amid the cheers
and roars from the crowd he screamed and screamed and screamed and
screamed. ·
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