Space/ part 2 (standard:adventure, 1233 words) [2/2] show all parts
Author: Ashley K	Added: Mar 31 2007	Views/Reads: 2355/1658	Part vote: 0.00 (0 votes)
When a man finds himself stuck in space during a war between space and earth he finds that he might be putting himself in more trouble than he ever mint to get into.

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Larry seemed to have noticed she was upset because he was now rushing
over to comfort her. As they began to talk back in fourth in their 
alien like ways, I knew they where talking about me, which made me even 
angrier. I knew I couldn't hold it in much longer. I  slowly rose into 
a standing position making my way towards “Larry” ,clenching my fist 
getting ready to attack, but before I could even lift my fist I was 
being cared away while I floated in mid air. I gasped in mere shock!  I 
noticed that Larry's finger tips where glowing brighter then ever 
before. Before I could make a fuss over this everything went blank. It 
felt like hours before my vision went back to normal. At first all I 
could see was blurry shapes and figures, then finally I could hear 
faint voices in the background. The color started to form. I noticed 
that I couldn't move. It was that moment when I started to panic. The 
people in the background noticed that I was awake and started to rush 
in every direction as if some terrible accident had just occurred. My 
breath began to slow down making it hard for my lungs to continue with 
their work. I could feel my body slowly shutting down. My chest was 
bursting with fright, as it made desperate attempts to draw in some 
air. Once again everything started to get dark. Just as I took in my 
very last breath I heard a scream. It was no ordinary scream though, it 
was a scream of terror and pain, but I had no time to think of it 
though because it was at that moment that my lungs gave in..... 

To find out what happens and if the person lives keep an eye out for my
next book coming soon, and don't forget to email me and tell me what 
you think, I am always open to new ideals 


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