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True Pain (standard:poetry, 236 words)
Author: cracker11Added: Dec 30 2009Views/Reads: 2306/1517Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)
I wrote this when my best friend got kicked out of their house. She was only 13. She had to go to Tampa to live with her dad.
 



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It then spreads 

That huge ass mess 

Into a fire pit. 

Lights a bonfire. 

Collects the ashes, 

Spreading them all over 

This accursed world, 

So you can never 

Put yourself back together. 

The worst part is still yet to come. 

Taking your heart, 

Out of the mess, 

And deciding to keep it. 

Locking it up in a 

Wretched chamber. 

With razors and knives 

Plastering all sides. 

So it can continuously, 

Fill your heart, 

With torturing pain and memories. 

Your poor, broken, 

Defeated, wretched, 

But infinitely beating heart. 

Although, this is only 

The beginning of the 

Pain you will forever feel.


   


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