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|Just Another Day (standard:adventure, 2849 words)|
|Author: kain||Added: Jul 16 2002||Views/Reads: 3107/1969||Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)|
|Donald is an every day joe but with a single accident things are about to change|
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story DONALD- I think it was about five MARK- Well do you think you would noticed if she was there or not, you must have been knackered DONALD- Year your probably right Mark returns to his desk and starts to work again Donald rubs his eyes and does the same. SCENE 5 EXT-OFFICE It is now dark outside and Donald emerges from the building he gets in his car and drives away Donald is driving by some woodland and is nearly asleep when suddenly a Fox appears from out of the trees. Donald swerves out of the way and narrowly misses it. Donald is shocked and now fully awake SCENE 6 Donald enters the house and starts too walk up the stairs the camera follows slowly he gets into bed again there is no one in the bed with him A load bang of a door can be heard Donald sits up in bed when there are no more sounds he lays back down and falls asleep His wife then enters the room and claims into bed with him SCENE 7 INT-KITCHEN It is breakfast again Donald is sat at the breakfast table, Louise is stood at the sink DONALD- where were you last night LOUISE- me ermmm I was downstairs getting a drink when you came in DONALD- then why did the front door slam shut LOUISE- well I thought I heard something outside anyway why were you early last night DONALD- I done most of the work I had too do the night before LOUISE- have you got much too do tonight DONALD- year I got a bit to do I think a bit later tonight LOUISE- well I'll tell you what I'll wait up for you tonight a make you something to eat alright DONALD- year that would be lovely thanks SCENE 8 Donald goes the same routine as last time without looking INT-OFFICE MARK- How you doing Don DONALD- I was alright until I realised that I had to go to work MARK- yeah I know what you mean BOSS- come on you two get some work done especially you Mark I may have to reconsider you having that time off today Later on after Mark has left, it dark outside DONALD- how come Mark left early OFFICE WORKER- I thought you new he's got a new girlfriend problem is she's married DONALD- what? OFFICE WORKER- he's been seeing her for a few weeks know Donald runs out of the office BOSS- hey Donald you need to get those reports in, and just because Marks having time off does not mean you can as well. SCENE 9 EXT-ROAD Donald is driving very fast and is still a bit sleepy he is coming too the road where he missed the fox A women appears in the road Donald doesn't see her There is a load thud it wakes up Donald DONALD- WHAT THE FUCK? I bet it's another fox Donald exist the car and looks at what he has hit There is a young women lying dead in the road DONALD- oh shit Donald just looks at the body in shock; there is a long silence. Donald begins to shake. DONALD- what the hell am I going to do, well it was an accident so no one will blame me, but they might not believe me, I might get sent to prison for this, I can't go to prison, I'm not a criminal, I don't belong in prison. No ones seen me, no one can say it was me, but they might be able to trace me if I leave the body Donald starts too load the body into the boot of the car. He struggles with the weight but manages to get it in; he slams the boot shut. He then claims into his car and drives off. SCENE 10 EXT-HOUSE Donald exits the car, he looks shaken up. He enters the house INT-HOUSE Donald enters the front room the on the floor are Mark and Louise kissing. Donald still shaken looks at them both, he then stumbles into the kitchen. The sound of Louise and Mark getting dressed, the front door slams shut. Louise then enters the kitchen Donald has his back to her. Louise-Well don't just stand there say something Donald still in silence with his back to her. There is a long silence Donald-Just get out of my way Donald shoves past Louise and heads up the stairs she is left alone in the kitchen. SCENE 11 INT-LIVING ROOM Donald is sat in the front room watching television The news starts News reporter-The breaking story this morning is the disappearance of the daughter of Ian Bradley the infamous gangland boss she is thought to be dead as traces of her blood have been found on the Ainsty road Donald turns off the television Donald-oh fuck that's me dead if they find out it's me I'm done for even if I go to prison I'm still a dead man I'll have to..... Louise-Donald is that you look we need to talk Donald stands up Donald-Not now Donald pushes past her and exits the room. Louise-We need to talk this isn't going to go away (SHOUTING AFTER HIM) INT-BEDROOM Louise is laid in bed on her own she is asleep The noise of someone digging can be heard off screen Louise wakes up and hears the noise she gets out of bed and heads over to the window and pulls open the curtains. Donald is out side digging in the back garden Louise exits the room and heads down stairs EXT-BACKGARDEN Louise appears in the back doorway Donald doesn't see her and carries on digging Louise-Donald what are you doing Donald-What does it look like the gardening Louise-But it's eleven ‘o' clock at night and you've never done it before Donald-Well I can start can't I Louise-Look about last night I jus.................. A hand can be seen protruding from the ground where Donald is digging Donald looks down and realises that she has seen the hand. Louise-what have you done have you killed Mark just to get back at me Donald-No No it's not Mark it's just some girl Louise-So you were making me feel guilty last night even though you were sleeping with some little tramp but instead of finishing with her you killed her instead (she starts to turn hysterical) Donald reaches towards her Donald-no it's not what you think Louise screams Louise-Get away from me you murderer Donald-I'm not a murderer it was an accident I didn't mean to...... Louise starts to run towards the house, Donald gives chase Louise-Help help he's trying to kill me (screaming) They both run into the house, Louise enters the kitchen and shuts the door and holds it against Donald who is trying to get in. INT-HALLWAY Donald is trying to push the door open but is unable to Donald-Louise let me in I just want to talk to you that's all I'm not going to hurt you INT-KITCHEN Louise-Keep out I'm ringing the police Louise reaches for the phone and dials in the number for the police INT-HALLWAY Donald-No don't do that I can explain it was an accident I didn't mean to kill her INT-KITCHEN Louise-Hello, yes it's my husband he's trying to kill me, he's already killed one girl now he's after me he's out side the door and he's trying to get in quick he's trying to kill me INT-HALLWAY Donald-I'm not going to kill you at all I just want to talk that's all Louise-The police are on there way (from inside the kitchen) Donald starts to become stressed and runs out of the house, he gets into the car and begins to drive away franticly. SCENE 12 INT-KITCHEN There are two police officers in the room with Louise who is sat a the kitchen table Officer-Have you any idea where your husband could have gone you know friends Family Louise-He can't be at his families they live too far away and his only friend was Mark But I don't think that he'll be going there Officer-Could you just run through what happened one more time please Louise-Well I went out into the garden and found him burying the body of some poor Women who he'd just killed in cold blood then when he saw me he turn into a Maniac and tried to kill me right there in the garden so I just ran into the house And called the police Officer-That's all for now would you like us to contact someone for you so that you're not On your own Louise-Yes could you call Mark for me his number is on the fridge, thanks SCENE 13 INT-CAR Donald is at the wheel of the car driving frantically EXT-CAR Donald is driving extremely fast down the motorway INT-CAR Donald-Shit shit shit what the hell am I going to do now I can't go back, they won't Believe me that it was an accident the only thing I can do is keep on running And hope I can lose them SCENE 14 EXT-HOUSE A car pulls up in to Donald's houses drive four men exit the car and walk towards the house INT-HOUSE The front door is suddenly kick open from the outside the four men then enter the house INT-LIVING ROOM Mark and Louise are sat on the sofa Mark with his arm around Louise. One of the men grabs Mark and throws him to the ground another grabs hold of Louise IAN-Which one of you two know where the fuck Donald Harris is Mark-Look I don't know who you are but you can't just barge in here like this and... IAN-Just answer the fucking question Mark-I don't know where he is IAN-Do you know where he is (talking to Louise) Louise-N..N. N.. No I don't know where he is Ian-Well if he turns up ring this number right Ian passes Louise a small card with a number written on it, the men all leave the house SCENE 15 EXT-CAFÉ This is a small café at the side of the road there are a few cars parked out side one of witch is Donald's. INT-CAFÉ There are tables in the café, most of which are empty the CAMERA MOVES IN on to Donald who is sat at the corner of the room. Donald is sat reading a newspaper. At T.V is on in the corner of the room the news has just started. Reporter-The hunt for Donald Harris continues today but the hunt has increased with the Farther of the young girl joining the chase, he is the well know Ian Starling Who is best remembered when he himself was on trail for murdering to men As we all know Ian was never convicted of the crime even though the Evidence was stacked against he has also been associated with gangland Activities. Mr Starling was unable to answer any question when asked today Donald-Shit!! As soon as Donald says this everyone in the café turns and looks at him Donald immeaditly pulls the newspaper over his face. Reporter-We have had news just in that a 500,000 dollar reward has been offered for the Capture of Donald Harris The bar man reaches for his gun under the counter and brings it to bear on the table at which Donald has been sitting Donald is no longer sitting there only the paper remains The CAMERA ZOOMS IN on the front page of the newspaper Donald's face is on the front page. EXT-CAFÉ Donald is running towards his car he then enters the car and drives quickly away from the café. SCENE 16 EXT-ROAD SIDE Ian and the other men who were at Donald's house are stood at the road side where there are numerous cars parked at the side of the road. Ian-This was where he was last seen at this café so he can't have got that far from this Position remember to use the smaller road cause he's more likely to use them to Avoid the cops this is the registration of the car he's using The camera has a CLOSE UP of the piece of paper, which is handed to one of the Other men so that we can see it clearly. Ian-Lets gets going ring me as soon as you find him All the men then enter their cars and drive off in different directions. SCENE 17 EXT-MOTEL It is night time a neon sign from the motel can been seen flashing The camera ZOOMS IN on to a room on the ground floor INT-MOTEL Donald emerges from the bathroom and sits down on the bed. Lights flash through the window from out side Donald sit up and looks out of the window. A car pulls up in front of his room and next to his car which is parked outside two men exit the car they begin two circle around Donald's car Donald crouches down below the widow we can hear the conversation We watch the conversation from DONALDS POINT OF VIEW First Man-This is the car Second Man-That's it better ring the boss The First Man pulls out a mobile and begins too type in a number First Man-Go find out which room he's in while I do this Second Man-O.K The second man heads towards the reception area Donald begins to crawl back Into the room he starts to gather his things together he then goes back to the window the First Man is still stood there on his own on the telephone Donald creeps over to the door and slowly opens it the man on the phone has not seen him. The second man ten emerges from the reception area and begins to shout over to the other man who turns to face him. Donald then runs up behind him the Second Man starts to point at Donald behind the First Man. Donald pushes the First Man in the back before he has chance to turn around. Donald then runs toward his car he get in and starts the engine the two men begin to run towards the car but Donald starts the engine and drives off before they get near him. The two men draw their guns and open fire on the car, Donald drives off. The two men run back to their car and start to drive off in the direction of Donald, as they pull out of the car park another car pulls out in front of them Ian leans out of the window Ian- Have you found him? First Man-Yes he's just gone up that way Ian then immediately drive in the direction of Donald followed by the two men A car chase then ensues Tweet
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