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Nature's Ruin (standard:poetry, 100 words)
Author: XenoWarriorAdded: Sep 30 2000Views/Reads: 3445/6Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)
Its my first, I'd like some feedback. A bit about what I think about whats going on in the world today.

Nature is lovely 

She turns away her sad face 

We are a disgrace 

*	*	* 

The air is poison 

She turns her beautiful back 

Or do we turn it? 

*	*	* 

Loggers do their rape 

She walks away from humans 

Where lies the true blame? 

*	*	* 

To late, we notice 

But she is much to far gone. 

Where do we go now? 

*	*	* 

We cry for her love 

She will no longer give us 

Her gentle embrace 

*	*	* 

We swallow ourselves 

She weeps for that which was lost 

Do we deserve it?


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