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Without you (standard:poetry, 66 words)
Author: TZ613Added: Nov 11 2000Views/Reads: 2611/0Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)
My first attempt at poetry, woul appreciate any and all feedback
 



Your smile is like a sunrise 

breathing life into an empty heart 

Your eyes so brown and deep 

that I cheerfully drown in them every day 

Radiating beauty from your very presence 

you force the storm clouds to flee from the sky 

Just being here is a life preserver to my soul 

you keep me afloat and give me hope 

For without you 

tomorrow never comes 


   


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