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A Timid Riot, A Broken Eye (standard:poetry, 56 words)
Author: Patrick GreenAdded: Aug 02 2004Views/Reads: 2794/0Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)
Something short about my ex-girlfriend to get my feet wet before i start writing stories.

disabling disaster 

slow and quiet 

horrid in nature 

but just as content 

with endless words 

to dutifully express 

the breaking of fingers 

counting regrets 

that you created 

out of thin air 

with no effort 

and little care 

to slap awake 

real a lie zing 

every moment wasted 

3 hundred 6 tea 5 days 

you ended me.


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