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A FOGGY DAY (standard:other, 507 words)
Author: JocaAdded: Apr 24 2010Views/Reads: 5683/0Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)
About a foggy day. Written by a fifth grader, so you can see what us young kids have in mind ;]
 



A FOGGY DAY It was a foggy day in April.  I went to the bus stop that
morning, and realized the whole world was masked with fog.  The world 
that we all know and have come to love, was covered with a thick gray 
substance that fills you with joy.  It was a bit scary to not be able 
to see anything, but you have to live like you're dying, and take 
risks. 

That specific day I felt down.  I was disappointed  due to the fact that
I was just mixed up about everything. Life itself had disappointed me, 
and it's hard to look life hard in the eye, and not shed a tear. Life 
has its ups and downs, but this particular morning had something 
special about it. 

I was at the school around 8:00a.m., and I looked at the fog surrounding
me.  It was a bit harder to take in breaths, but it was worth it.  The 
feeling of being surrounded my those particles of coolness made my day. 
 Every step I took, I could feel the thick covering of clouds.  This 
was only the second time I had experienced fog.  I never thought much 
about fog, due to the fact that it only took place once in my life, 
when I wasn't old enough to quite interpret the concept of fog.  It was 
like I was in heaven.  The fresh air I breathed, the cool breeze 
sending chills down my arms, and feeling myself quavering.  It may have 
been a bit uncomfortable, due to the temperature being 40 degrees, but 
it was one of the best things I've ever seen in my life.  I felt like 
the fog represented me being on the battlefield of life, and being 
tested to see if I was prepared for an eternity full of perfection. 

As a human being I do have my sins, but I try my best to keep my promise
to God, and Jesus Christ that I shall try to be my best.  That day made 
me realize that life is short, and we make mistakes because we're only 
human.  But one thing I do not allow myself to do is to regret my 
mistakes.  We must never regret the things we have done, but to learn 
from them.  Life itself is a test to see if you are able to pass on to 
eternal perfection, which in reduced words is heaven.  I would rather 
believe in God for my whole life, and realize there isn't one, than to 
not believe in God my whole life, and realize that indeed there is one. 


Foggy days have the ability to make us think, and it shall never be of
my knowledge how weather has this incredulous ability.  But we stand as 
human beings, and do not realize immortality.  Immortality is a thing 
that a person can only put on themselves.  We try our best, but 
remember that perfection will never be among us until we are parted by 
death, and sent to an eternity of perfection.


   


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