|A True Love Story (standard:romance, 1329 words) [1/2] show all parts|
|Author: Lowell Guerra||Updated: Nov 02 2000||Views/Reads: 3018/1634||Part vote: 0.00 (0 votes)|
|do u think Romeo & Juliet is "true love?" then please read this, and this story might show you otherwise. This story is about an ugly guy (not because he did somethign wrong like in beauty & the beast), but he was just born that way, a|
Click here to read the first 75 lines of the story "We've been together a lot..and...I was thinking.." Alfred was trying to find the words to say. "Maybe we should be more than we already are." April got a confused look on her face. "What do ya mean?" April asked. "What I mean is.." he began. This was it. This was the right time. "Will you go out with me?" April took her hand away from Alfred. She had a mad look on her face. "Get the fuck away from me! I don't wanna see you ever again." she replied. What happened? Alfred thought. Alfred tried to hold back the tears from his eyes again, but they were still too strong. Even more stronger with the other girl. He actually knew her, spent time with her and knew her name. Alfred didn't know why he cried, he didn't really "like her, like her," he just wanted to do her a favor. The feeling Alfred was feeling wasn't love like he had assumed. It was a best friend, kinda like part of the family. He never had a best friend, with the limit of friends he had. He wished he could take back what he said and forget it ever happened. But he knew he couldn't, no matter how much he wanted to. CHAPTER THREE: For months he was lonely. He was all alone, he didn't have April to be with anymore. How could he be so stupid? How could he think that it was love? Well he shouldn't ask himself those questions too much, because it won't matter. It's done and can't be changed. He let a tear drop down his right cheek from the loneliness he felt. Alfred was now 13. He saw this one girl in his class who was real pretty. But noticed she had the look of a conceited girl. So he figured she was conceited. In PE class he saw her with her friend. Her friend told her it hurt her when she did something to her. "Then don't be my friend," she said. Oh my gosh! Thought Alfred. She is SO conceited! He tried not to let the beautiful looks of her make him think she was a good person. A week later they watched a movie in their class and a guy that has been good to the main character had died. Alfred thought that was really sad that someone who was so good had to die like that. "Aw that's so sad!" said the girl Alfred said was conceited. Wow, she has feelings. Alfred said in his mind. She really has feelings, she really cares about people. That's when Alfred fell in love. The next day when they had to be in the same group, he asked her name. "Sharla. Hi, what's your name?" she asked him as she stuck her hand out to him to shake his hand. Alfred's eyes widened with amazement. He didn't expect her to be so nice. Especially the first time he saw her. No one offered to shake his hand. He smiled as he accepted the offer and shook her hand. "Hi, I'm Alfred." he said. to be continued... if you'd like this story to be continued, then e-mail email@example.com Tweet
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