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|All a Lie Pt.3 (standard:mystery, 419 words) [3/4] show all parts|
|Author: Cooper47||Added: Mar 06 2007||Views/Reads: 564/0||Part vote: 0.00 (0 votes)|
|he has a hallucination for the first time-or does he?|
All a Lie CHAPTER 3 The Hallucination RIIIIIIIIIIIIIIING!! The alarm woke him up for the first day out of the hospital. His heart-wait no, Coop's heart racing as he got up, a slight pain from the stiches as he moved-just as Dr. Liner said would happen. He was issued to stay bed-rested for 72 hours after release of the hospital, but it felt so good to get around and moving. It was real quite, like it was when his father died. Oh, the memories still in his mind, vivid, THERE. He and his dad were going to McDonald's for a burgur in the middle of summer. All he could remember was, it was HOT. Like 112*, and he couldn't wait to get the burgur, he had a thing for them. When a few shots were herd. It had scared him a little but not too much, but they were loud and all the sudden he sagged,"Dad? Are you oka-", the car veered to the left and fliped over. It was assumed he hit the weel when he died and crashed the car. Only one person was classified as the killer: CJ. He went outside to look to see if Ashley (You see, her nickname is Ash, but here real name is Ashley) was out there. Sometimes she would be out there-sittings, just sitting, listing to the wind in the leaves. There she was, at the corner...holding a knife. he ran to her when he tripped and fell. He knew that it would happen if he fell. His stiches rippped. Blood started comming out again. "Mom", he said feebly. "Cedar! What are you doing? Are you hallucinating", and he was on the floor of the hospital room. "Where am I". "You were shouting Mom! MOM! and tripped over your IV and fell, we know you wern't dreaming". His mind raced, Who am I? Where am I? He was walking down the hallway talking to his mom, on the way to the TV room. "I told you, it is against the law to drive a camel on the highway", Ashley said. "What?" "You asked if I knew a weird law", she said. "How did I get here, I was sitting in my hospital room bleedin' and now we are walking down this hallway. Are we still in the hospital", and that question lengered, Who am I? He had a blackout, where you can't recall what happened in a period of time. Very frightning subject. Am I going crazy, he asked himself. Tweet
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