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|All a Lie Chapter 4 (standard:mystery, 507 words) [4/4] show all parts|
|Author: Cooper47||Added: Mar 08 2007||Views/Reads: 769/0||Part vote: 0.00 (0 votes)|
|He is having tons of hallucinations, but tells no one.|
All a Lie Chapter 4 What is real?? It was the time. The time that Cedar feared for twelve days. If you were at this day and in his shoes, you wouldn't want to even sleep for the pure horror--the day he gets his stiches tooken out!!!!!!!!!!!!! Okay, mabye he over reacted, but still, I wouldn't imagine it to be so fun. "Okay, Three snips of my trusty sissors, and you sir, will be okay", said Dr. Liner,"Also your mother and I talked of your idea of going back to school, and we said", pausing for a dramatic pause,"Yes". Cedar turned real quick to look at his mother, to see if he was lying, but as he did so the sissors thrusted threw his--I ment Coop's heart. At first he didn't notice anything--by he I ment Cedar, but then some people were stareing at his chest, couldn't feel it. Everyone was yelling, but it seemed faint, like it was a dream--Oh my God, I am having a hallucination. So he thought he could do anything, but still failing to see the frickin' sissors sticking out of him. Then he looked down. No big deal if I am hallucinating, then I could pull this right out--and get out of this place. Only to hear RIIIIIIIIIING! The thing is, he isn't hallucinating, just lost all his feeling from massive blood loss, and he is beginning to faint leads to the weird hearing. "Ha! See ya, I will get a doughnut", as he threw the sissors at someone else after ripping it from his body. Only he had to get out, and the door was blocked by people, he looked around, and he saw a huge open window, and he jumped--jumped right threw it. It would have been fun, only it was a TWO STORY drop, and nothing but street to land on, he had fainted even before he hit the bottom. RIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIING! He sees a clock, and he is all better. No pain or anything. Then he asked,"what day is it? How long since I fell", he asked himself though. As he got up he got another idea, he looked at the calender,"April 9!! Its been a month". Then the walls melted away and new walls apeared, hospital walls. Huge rounds of pain soon followed. All over, he couldn't escape the pain. Then he was stareing at the calender again. He couldn't figure out which one was real. He had 12 cycles of both places, and each time he couldn't find which was real. Then another hallucination--or was it--apeared, his stiches were gone and he was at school. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOO! He couldn't think. Too many thoughts. Then all of them dissappeared, evan the real one, which ever one it was. He was in blackness, floating. He couldn't breathe. Also he was stuck. Couldn't move. Then a light, he tryed to run towared it, but couldn't move. "No", he wispered."HELP"! Due to the time, this will be a two part chapter, PT. B coming soon to a computer near you. Tweet
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