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|I'm Taken (standard:humor, 497 words)|
|Author: jcrct7||Added: Oct 15 2002||Views/Reads: 2038/1||Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)|
|Another "mini-story" I wrote. This plot happened to me at school just recently. Hope it brings a bit of humor to your day!|
I'm Taken Written By Chris Wade (jcrct7) My lovely, yet quaint, abode was located in a silent, untouchable area. A thin crevice plunged, more times than none, in an ebony of light. One peculiar day, just before the hot of noon, I was plunged into surrounding brightness and swiftly carried to another destination. This action startled me quite sufficiently so I froze and gazed upward to the colorful blur of the world. During this rampage fiasco, I had lain in my canopy to slumber for a bit, but the roughness of the transporter caused the many, but deicate attachements to loosen and dangle on great, parallel pit-falls below me. I was slammed into the cold sid eof my home and I wondered if the movement would ever cease. To my surprize, it did and I sighed, for a moment, of relief and regained my buoyancy in the atmosphere of the ozone. A sudden cry of disbelief boomed through me and I was shook from my livings and forever fell to "the outside" grounds. It was, oh so, horrible, the pain that shot all over me. I burned from the fall, yet shook from coolness of the ground I was unrightfully placed. My house was turned from my friendliness and it was smashed into me. Total darkness. Total discombobulation. Total deprivcy of life itself. I was, at last, dead from this fast-paced, confusing, odd world. The abode was lifted from the ground. I was lifted into the air also, but my physical self remained in a greenish-brown pile of goop. I saw my body, within a mere seventeen minutes, two seconds, carried slowly and whistfully by a small company of annoying insects. Ants. Others tried to capture me for their drawn-near matinee, but didn't succede. Sorry, fellow annoyances. I'm taken. Note From The Author This is the second "mini-story" I have published on this site. I wrote it during my Math class, as it was most boring today, and it is acually about a true event that happened to me and others in, well Math class! This mini-story is about a spider. The main character who is telling the story. His abode or home is my Math binder. One day, when I acually needed my binder, I saw that a spider had made a web ont he top part of the binder, where the papers are. My friends and I shook it out onto the floor and my friend took my binder and slapped it dead. Around twenty minutes later, we saw ants carrying it away. From our point of view, it was rather funny. This mini-story is from the spider's point of view, but I still hope you got some humor of the wordings and discriptions and such. That is the explaination of this writing! Tell me what you think by rating it or even giving me some comments! I would love to hear from you and look for my next "mini-story": Know Thank you for reading! Tweet
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