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The Third Planet- 2. Life at the Start (youngsters:fantasy, 567 words) [2/4] show all parts
Author: fissAdded: Apr 11 2003Views/Reads: 2890/2Part vote: 0.00 (0 votes)
Evil has encountered the sun and plans to take over the Universe. What can the surviving prince of the sun, Azyla, do to save other species?
 



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“Ro....... Rose.....................?” 

She gave me an evil grin, “I'm your boss.” 

“............................”All I could do was to stare, and stare. 
This is just too amazing.  “And Amy is too.” Rose added. 

Amy and sat down beside me “It's only her we have to listen to, and
Azyla too.  And we train everyday from 5~7:30 A.M. and at night it's 
19P.M.~1:00A.M.  That O.K with you?” 

I nodded.  I often stay awake for a long time, lying in bed, feeling
tired of this world.  At least life is changing, I hope. 

“Now, I have to tell you, you need to change your name, to be used in
here.  By the way, this is Azyla's palace.” Rose said, “I am harsh on 
this, I tell you.  I may have punishments.  And on homework, 
hehehe...........” 

Amy sighed “She add all extra stuff into it......even for PE, but of
course, that's because we are warriors.” And she smiled, “You'll get 
used to it.  But do worry, it's going to hurt.” 

And with that, they left.  I lay back on the bed, thinking about it. 
Then I took out the ring and studied it. 

“Put it on when you are ready, leave if you want.” Azyla's voice still
rang in my ears.  Where can I go if I leave?  I can go find my parents, 
tell them it's all a joke, or I just find a job.  What would happen if 
I go back to my parents?  They'd probably be glad, only that I'm alive. 
But go back to that boring life? 

My thoughts raced.  “If you haven't lived for anything, than what are
you dying for?” Azyla's voice rang in my ears again. 

I stood up and opened the door, finding Rose and Amy outside.  They were
sitting on the either side of the door, and they looked up as I walked 
out. 

“You decided yet?” 

I looked at Rose, and suddenly knelt down.  I have never felt so save
before.  Rose was quite surprised at me and she stood up. 

I felt like my chest is going to burst with hot blood, my heart is
filled with courage.  Somehow I feel like crying. 

“I've never had anything to look forward to, but now I have something,
someone, some goal to live for.  I, fiss lin, will use my life to 
protect the people care for me in this community!” 

Rose looked at me for a while, silent.  Then she started to grin, and it
turned into a smile, and she knelt down in front of me and hugged me. 

She put the ring on for me, and I felt a power encounter me from the
ring.  Something seems to buzz on, and I “heard” Rose clearly in my 
head: “How do you feel now?” 

I suppose this was the way Azyla meant, heart language.  We can know
everything the others think if they are wearing the ring. 

“You are tired, get some rest, fiss, wake up at 4:30 the best, training
starts at 5.  Be on time.” And with that, they left. 

Life has really begun. 

(To be continued, see “The Third Planet- 3 Castle life & training life,
coming up next time) 


   



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