Click here for nice stories main menu

main menu   |   youngsters categories   |   authors   |   new stories   |   search   |   links   |   settings   |   author tools


Dear God (standard:poetry, 193 words)
Author: MickalaAdded: Sep 09 2003Views/Reads: 1706/0Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)
a poem about someone who prays to God to take away their pain. Feed back for this or any other works would be appreciated. Thanks!
 



Dear God 

Dear God, this pain and sadness overwhelms me, 

Why won't this evil let me be? 

I'm not in the mood to sing and talk, 

I hurt so bad I can hardly walk. 

Everytime I think it's gone, it proves me wrong, 

This time, I don't know if I can last long. 

Dear God, I'm so tired of being ill, 

If this is going to kill me, I wish it will. 

I'm tired of dying bit by bit, 

My life light is barely lit. 

Suddenly, I went around a bend, 

Is this now the end? 

Is my ordeal finally through? 

Have I done what I was supposed to do? 

Dear God, why are You doing this to me? 

If You truly love me, then please let me be. 

I want to be able to fully live my life, 

Please, don't cut if short as if with a knife. 

I've got so much left to do, 

Is it really time for my life to be through? 

All of this, You probably already know, 

So, please, don't make me go. 

There is so much I can still give, 

Dear God, please let me live.


   


Authors appreciate feedback!
Please vote, and write to the authors to tell them what you liked or didn't like about the story!
Mickala has 10 active stories on this site.
Profile for Mickala, incl. all stories
Email: SolarianPrincess
Due to abuse, voting is disabled.
For a quick, anonymous response to the author of this story, type
a message below. It will be sent to the author by email.

stories in "poetry"   |   all stories by "Mickala"  






Nice Stories @ nicestories.com, support email: nice at nicestories dot com
Powered by StoryEngine v1.00 © 2000-2014 - Artware Internet Consultancy BV