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The Crime (standard:poetry, 65 words)
Author: NewKidAdded: Jan 13 2004Views/Reads: 1425/0Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)
Although short, its about a bad decision made by a good kid on drinking and driving. This is my first poem , so please give me feed back. Thanks, NewKid!
 



The Crime 

The crime I committed was so wrong 

But I wasn't thinking of the consequences that night. 

People thought I was such a good kid. 

The crime I committed was so wrong. 

Who would have thought I would do what I did. 

Drinking and driving, just isn't right. 

The crime I committed was so wrong 

But I wasn't thinking of the consequences that night. 


   


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