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For Lara (standard:poetry, 147 words)
Author: JupiterAdded: Aug 15 2004Views/Reads: 1709/0Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)
I am no good at poems, but I wrote this short poem for a girl I met online, and corresponded with. I do not know how, but I liked her so much.
 



Sometimes people make mistakes with the ones they love, though they make
these mistakes with the best intentions in mind. Mine were fatal. My 
excessive care for Lara caused her a lot of embarrassement, and pushed 
her to terminate her relation with me. So, she asked me to stop all 
contact with her. She got what she wanted, but before she did, I sent 
her this last poem: 

I will always remember 

. . . . . the day when we first met 

- 

It was on 10 Spetember 

. . . . . a date I can't forget 

- 

I was talking to people 

. . . . . and chatting on the net 

- 

The chance of meeting you 

. . . . . was all I dreamed to get 

- 

You were the sweetest girl 

. . . . . I met on this planet 

- 

Your love went through my heart 

. . . . . just like a blind bullet 

- 

Since then I'm falling for you 

. . . . . On you my heart is set 

- 

I always think about you 

. . . . . I'll stay in love I bet 

- 

You warmed my life with words 

. . . . . For you I'll stay in debt 

- 

I hope I didn't leave you 

. . . . . with feelings of regret


   


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