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|troble for the 50th (standard:science fiction, 875 words)|
|Author: imnotokay||Added: May 02 2006||Views/Reads: 1809/0||Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)|
|it is a short 40k novel that i have just started to write. it is based on a chaos world and the imperial gaurd and black templars are landing to recapture the world for the emporier.|
This is my story and it's to do with an imperial guard regiment and a im hoping to turn this idea into a book. Btw this is only a rough guide to what I want it to be as im not sure I might not include dialogue at first in this rough. There company is called the "helotas 50th" and are especially good at marksman ship and are know for holding the line against overwhelming odds. They are in a crusade for the Segmentum Obscurus. And they are fighting the siege to take the mighty Fortress world Mordax Prime. And are facing fierce opposition from Traitor Guardsmen, Cultists (who are numerous but ill trained) and finally the mighty traitor Space Marine Legions of Chaos. On this world the forces of Chaos are entrenched deeply. and the helotas 50th along with the 45th,46th,47th and 120th and along with a battalion size force of Black Templar's (Who are a crusading force and have no home world and live in a fleet of ships.), and a armoured division from the heart of the Cadia system. and there was reports in the first stages of the fighting off the mysterious "Legion of the Dammed" appearing to aid the Black Templar's and the 50th in capturing the "beach head" on the planet as they encounter fierce resistant's from a company off alpha legion and 2 battalions of cultists. Taken From "The Archives off Crusades off Legend." Intro to the story: Now the siege of the main city has begun this is were we first encounter the 50th and there leader Colm. Luke Destril. Who likes to lead from the front with his force while Lord General Balton commands from the "safety" off the HQ. Chapter 1: The Landing! As the Troopship came in to land private Jamie Destril, Colm. Destrils Only Son can feel every bone in his body shaking. He can feel his heart racing with the adrenaline of the rapidly approaching battle. he see's sergeant Datherial stand up and get near the door his las rifle slung on his shoulder and grasped by his left hand to keep it close to his body. "5 seconds" says the pilot over the vox. As trooper Destril looked around he could only see the 4 opposite him because off the restraints. They were troopers Thasos, Ballon, Kenstiff and Junut. He knew he had troopers Zrehl and Ikuru. He had known Ikuru all his life, he had lived in the next had and they had grown up with dreams off joining the Guard. This was going to be their "Trial by Fire" as the officers called it. There first real combat mission. Their training had been really hard but they were in one off the best Regiments of the Helotas imperial guardsmen. They knew they would have help from the Adeptus Astartes but not just any they were being aided by the Space Marines of Legend "The Black Templars". The Loading Ramp Light Turned to Amber and they all felt a sudden thump as the thrusters kicked in to steady there landing. "Green Light Go Go Go Go" said the sergeant. The ramp dropped and suddenly the clatter of heavy stubbers and auto rifles could be heard the sarge was the first out along with Kentriff and Ballon close behind him and in the blink of an eye the sarges head was gone. And Kentriff was on the floor holding in his guts, Ballon had got out and now then 17 other troopers started to pour out of the transport onto the battle field troopers to the left and to his right were being felled by hard ammunition. There looked like rag dolls being thrown back as the hard bullets of the autorifles hit them point blank nearly. They had missed the drop, and had landed on top of an enemy trench system. He could see the black Templars thurderhawks landing the black Templars onto the battle next to 10th squad. Destril was in the trench now, hugging the walls for cover. He shoot a cultist through the head as he charged him with a curved blade, and shoot 2more manning a heavy stubber. He was now with 4 more men they were Junut, Ikuru and Thasos and the other he didn't know. They could see a bunker which had a heavy bolter and an autocannon inside. He headed for the bunker with Junut and Ikuru at his side. He throw a grenade in side and heard shooting in a language he didn't understand. *BOOM* the grenade had gone off he stormed in shooting from his hip. He cut down 2 culists that came in the door opposite. Shooting 1 in the head and the other in the neck. He heard more shouting. As he looked round the corner he shoots pounded into the wall and wizzed past his head. They were a couple off steps away. He pulled out his bayonet and sliced the first 1s guts open. And stabbed the next one in his ribs he could feel his ribs crunching under the power of the knife. And shoot the last one in the guts twice and stopped his screaming with a quick slice off his blade against his neck. Tweet
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