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Someone Really Loves Me (standard:poetry, 453 words)
Author: LoriAdded: Nov 19 2007Views/Reads: 2616/1722Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)
It seems, in the last week, we’ve had a prankster who sends rude emails. I get a kick out of them. This is dedicated to that person. Forgive the graphic nature of this, the words are the actual ones I was sent.
 



Someone Really Loves Me 

~ 

First, I want to thank you 

for your emails 

when I was feeling blue. 

Your words were supposed to harm. 

But in them, 

I found your charm. 

~ 

This is what you said about “Loneliness.” 

“Reading this has convince me 

you have a mental problem 

and ever word was pure shit, 

with a topping on top.” 

You had your say. 

You thought 

to ruin my day. 

But instead it brought a smile 

to my face. 

Your comment made me realize 

my writing must be worthwhile. 

~ 

You're right in what you say. 

I do have a mental problem. 

I fight depression every day. 

My words weren't shit, though. 

It would've been nice, 

if you had started with hello. 

~ 

This is what you said about “My Love For You.” 

“Reading this made me sick to my stomach 

pure shit. 

With vomit on top.” 

How dare you ridicule my thought! 

They were written for someone I love 

with all my heart. 

They weren't shit with vomit on top. 

They were pure and sweet. 


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