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When We're Apart (standard:poetry, 149 words)
Author: LoriAdded: Jan 11 2008Views/Reads: 2567/0Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)
Describing what a woman thinks when she's not with the one she loves. Again, part of another poem I've chopped up to make it easier to read.
 



When We're Apart 

I miss you when your gone. I long for your touch, your voice on the
phone, your sarcastic humor, and all the endearments I once hated. When 
you're gone there is no color, no beauty, no rhyme. When you're not 
with me I feel so alone, confused, unloved, and out of time. 

Tell me the truth. Do you really love me? Or is it all a myth? I can't
stand this. It drives me nuts. 

I love you. Please say you are mine. Give me peace of mind. Take me,
break me, just say you feel the same. 

I miss you so much. I know I'm pouting, but I'm worried. I know who
you're with and it makes me feel like I'm dying. 

Tell me, what is in your heart. For your love I can't feel when you
we're apart. 

© October 30, 2007 by Lori


   


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