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niko (standard:fantasy, 1578 words)
Author: jackAdded: Jun 12 2008Views/Reads: 2749/1850Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)
a start to a interesting story about niko's i wont you to tell me to continue or not it is a orsome story abote a strong niko who is just trying to get by in the war
 



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‘ ha it's more fun this way ‘ yer fuck you ‘ i took a look at the girl 
on my bed she was still sleeping and i thort I'll be back before she'll 
wake so chaise and i headed to the meeting ‘ a chaise how many people 
is there going to be just the captains and there second in command 
‘WHAT!!!' i say that because i wasn't a captain and nether was chaise ‘ 
ha you just got promoted and gees who's your second in command ‘ holly 
shit man you for real' yep' we ran the rest of the way to the meeting 

I pushed open the door and everyone looked at me ‘are jack and chaise
the two knobs ‘oy who you calling knobs by the way me and jack hear 
have been going we should be running this hear joint ‘he stop and 
looked around at the facers the facers of scared Nikko alike ‘what are 
you all so shook up about ‘the shadow has allied with the chaos Nikko 
‘oh shit ‘it was me that spoke you see shadow are just mere colt 
members but now that the chaos gods were smiling on them they would way 
to powerful to impurely stop on owe own ‘we will hold them of till the 
civilians can get of this god forsaken planet understand ‘yer' 
understand!!! ‘sir yes sir ‘right move out ‘what are they attacking now 
‘they will be soon so get ready ‘sirens rang out ‘two arms' some random 
runs in ‘ow shit i get to see if she's ok ‘who ‘are i don't know her 
name but I've got to now ‘i ran out of the room and sprint as fast as i 
can fire goes every were there all ready attacking i keep running 
‘shit' i keep running when i get to the motel it's on fire ‘shit' i run 
in to the burning building but something grabs my arm ‘let go ‘but it's 
me ‘ it was the girl ‘ come on lets go' wait what's your name' Kirra' 

We both ran out into the streets dead and still fighting were every were
i grabbed a assault machine gun and started laying down fire ‘i have to 
get you to a evict point' what about you ‘i never planned to leave 
without a fight to the death but i couldn't tell Kirra ‘I'll be fine ‘i 
started to run to the dock i saw a squad of men in trouble ‘ are you 
all ok ‘ yer we are fine you need any help' could you escort Kirra to 
the dock's' shore there not to fare and there being held pretty well ‘ 
right then' Kirra ran up and hugged me ‘thank you ‘wait for me or my 
body ‘ and before she could say anything they took her away as for me i 
tern and began to run back to the fight i yearned for ‘How is it going 
man ‘oh you know just hanging out killing you know the ordinary ‘it was 
chaise he was on the front line doing what we do best killing A massive 
shake came out of the ground ‘holly fuck' a huge cave had risen out of 
the ground and was spitting out shadow and chaos we shot killing some 
but there were too many we have to get out of here 


   


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