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|niko (standard:fantasy, 1578 words)|
|Author: jack||Added: Jun 12 2008||Views/Reads: 1497/946||Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)|
|a start to a interesting story about niko's i wont you to tell me to continue or not it is a orsome story abote a strong niko who is just trying to get by in the war|
Boom thunderous fire herder ling in a bunker is a young Nikko named jack he is alone now comrades dead there he is taking cover with his rifle wishing he were someone else wishing of happiness' something he hadn't felt in a long time ‘no' i mast fight so someone else could feel it and think of him he jumps out of the bunker and run's towards the shadow Nikko's there are other's fighting the same i open fire there is no leader now we are alone and un lead with no moral i diced there and then that i would ‘come on men follow me to glory and to freedom ‘ instantly we have a leader we all charge and force the shadow back. Back to where they came from back to the shadows when the battle is won and all is thort to be well a huge cave open's up and more shadow poor's out ‘glory to the first man to die charge ‘but we are too few and they are so many we cannot win maybe that's what drives me forwards the knowledge that we would lose. I pick up a sword and charge right in to the thick of it but before i can do any real damage i take a sword to the gut i drop looking at my blood soaked hands and look around shadow's run past me and i drop another captain gone I awake in the back of a army personal carrier other Nikko's standing around me i feel the stiches in my gut someone see's me straight away ‘ how ya feeling ‘ like shit you ‘ ha I'm the one that saved your sorry ass ‘really ‘yer pulled you out before it was too late ‘ did we win' no answer but i know we had failed to drive the shadow back we had started with hundreds and ended with so few ‘ i thort i was died ‘ i did to but you were still breathing ‘ where are we heading ‘ ha were else main base for owe last stand for this planet ‘ main base was a huge forties that was the first thing built hear when the first arrived now it would be the last thing that would be destroyed We land with a jolt we are greeted by the captain of the base ‘feel free to heal up they aren't going to attack for a while ‘ why do you think that ‘ because we are retreating to fast for them to advance the first place i go is a bar i have a have a few drinks ‘so what you going to do now ‘ it was the bar keep he was short with black her and was very cheerful looking ‘ I've had enough to drink i think I'll put some coin's in that pin ball machine then call it a night ‘ i stand up and stumble towards the pin ball thing and put a two dollar coin in it the machine comes to life and i start bating the little ball around i notice a girl watching me play she was my age purple hair with pink eye's she had large ears that marched her hair with white on the inside her tail was also purple with a white tip she was perfectly carved body all and all very HOT ‘wont to play' shore' she stepped over and started beating the ball around but she misses and it goes down the hole here i stood behind her and placed my hands over hers and help her posh the right butane at the right time after about a half hour she said she had to go and i walked back over to the bar' change of plans i think I'll have another beer after i left the bar it was raining really hard i walked with unexpected ease back to my hotel ‘ and i said to myself what a wonderful ‘ my singing was interrupted by something it was crying i followed the noise to an alley behind the hotel it was the girl from the bar ‘hay are you all right ‘ she looked up at me with tier filled eyes she was drenched her clothes were all wet ‘here come with me I've got a place to stay i grabbed her hand and pulled her to her feet she hugged on to me and i led her out of the rain and into the hotel and up to my room i sat heron my bed and calmed her down ‘you clothes are all wet here' i walked over to the drowse next to the bed and pulled out some clothes a tee shirt and a pair of baggy black pants ‘here there a bath room over there' i pointed to the door in the room ‘ just leave your cloths in there ‘ she walked over to the door and quickly got change she walked out and sat on my bed eyes still full of tiers i raped my arm round her shoulder and hug her she started to cry again and hugged me again I had calmed her down and she was sleeping on my bed i was just wondering why she was alone why wasn't with her family and friends then it hit me most of the people living here were killed she must of been out when it started i had no family i was found at the army base on and never knew my parents i had friends but they were all in the army and bang ‘oy scum bag come and open this door ‘ shut up man ‘ why you aren't jack' no' it was chaise i jump up and walked over to the door ‘what's up' well open the door and i will tell you ‘ right ‘ i pulled open the door ‘what going on there is a meeting the big boss is going to talk to us about the battle coming up ‘ how could you just say that ‘ come on man it's me i now you love a good fight ‘ are shut up ‘ we Brock out laughing ‘ why couldn't you just tell me that throw the door Click here to read the rest of this story (42 more lines)
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