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Rave (standard:poetry, 149 words)
Author: BlindAngelAdded: Apr 08 2001Views/Reads: 2456/5Story vote: 0.00 (0 votes)
This poem exsists not only to describe something wonderful, but also to shaft all depressing self-pity poetry. If you like it (or if you don't) please vote or leave feedback.

The glowing lights create an ambience 

Your very soul seems to glow 

Music pumps to the rhythm of your heart 

Time stops its flow 

You can feel the energy as you stride 'cross the pavement 

Your car was trembling when you parked 

The whole world crackles with unreleased excitement 

The half grin just can't leave the faces 

You pay at the door 

One step in and the air embraces you 

Your feet seem to rise from the floor 

Suddenly you feel as if you've stepped into euphoria 

Snaking your way through masses 

Finding that place on the dance floor 

The people on the sidelines raise their glasses 

To toast the vitality that this room contains 

You've never felt more alive in your life 

Your scream of joy is lost in the clamor of sound 

The world is suddenly without pain, violence and strife 

And all is lost in ecstasy


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